Promise

Guilt
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This chapter might be a bit confusing, there's a lot of skipping from one person to another and also the tense changes. I've used a line to separate these bits so hopefully it'll make sense!! You've be warned though if it doesn't!!

'Here you go Hoseok, always wear this bracelet!'

'Why?'

'Because Hyung, you see the crystal there? Well, which ever one of us dies first, half his soul will go into the other person's crystal. Then, we'll always be with eachother! Even after death.'

'But Taehyung, what if it's the bad half of our souls. You know that it's split into a good half and a bad half!'

'Well Hyung, nothing can ever be fully bad. So together we'll have to find the good bits that are lost in the bad half.'

I see, okay i'll wear it. But never talk about dying again! I don't want to think about not being with you forever.'

'But with this bracelet, you will be.'

Hoseok woke up, the dream still fresh in his mind. He understood now. The bracelet he'd worn for 11 years did exactly what 9 year old Taehyung said it would. Half of Taehyung's soul must be in the small crystal, but it had escaped and it was obvious where it was now. The half of Taehyung's soul that went into the crystal must have been the bad half and when it escaped it became Tsumi. It explains everything; why Tsumi has Taehyung's voice and body, and who Tsumi is.

'Is the real reason why I can talk to Taehyung because half his soul is still alive?'

'Yes.' Somebody answered from the corner of the dim room. Obviously it was Tsumi. 'If you remove that bracelet, the alive half of Taehyung's soul with die and you'll never be able to speak to him again.'

Hoseok didn't turn around to face Tsumi, he stayed with his back to him. 'Are you human yet?'

'I will be, I just need a little more strength. I can survive outside your shadow and reflection, but I can't leave this house.' Tsumi answered.

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BangtanBAPSonyeondan #1
Chapter 12: WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sassyelf
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JustAnotherFangirl46 #3
Chapter 12: I WANT TO CRY!!! CARYS HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO MY FEELS :'(. YOUR WAY OF WRITING IS JUST SO POETIC AND AWESOME, I'M JEALOUS WAH!!!! HWAITING!! PLEASE RELEASE THE NEXT FIC SOON OMG
kkaepsongyehet #4
Chapter 12: *cries in Korean*(TT_TT)
I've never cried this hard over a story(//^//) I can't believe this made me cry like a crazy(TT_TT) I mean..yes I can believe it but I couldn't think it would Hurt this much(//^//)
That was happy but sad ending. I wished all the time V could stay..but I knew he could not.. coz well ppl would freak out..anyway..waaaah(//^//) I can't stop my tears(TT_TT) why is it so sad and happy at the same time?(//^//)
btw. It was longer than I thought♥♥♥ THANK YOU♥♥♥
I...am speechless>\\\\<
Taehyung really came back and saved Hoseok and Namjoon♥ But how Namjoon knew that Hoseok were there? There is few aperture points..like Namjoon at the cliff..how did he know? And those letters to members..what does there read? Could you make bonus chapter and write about those letters and how members reacts to them..and how they feel after Taehyung left..and that letter to his family..I'd like To know how his family would react to it..I mean..he's dead and suddenly they receives letter from him..
but yeah♥♥ I really loved this whole story♥♥it was so beautiful and different^^♥
this whole idea was sooo different and I enjoyed reading this♥♥ and I'm so sorry for you coz not so many ppl leave comments..mostly it's me with my crappy comments>\\\< you deserve way more respect!!!♥
I'm so sorry for Hoseok too(//^//) he had to let go of Taehyung AGAIN! right after he get him back(//^//)
I don't know what I should say..I feel like words can't describe my feels..and words won't tell what I want to say..there is no words for my feels...(//^//)
To be continued in second part. Right under this...↓
kkaepsongyehet #5
Chapter 11: you replied to my comment for chapter 8 and said that anything scarier or worse won't happen to Hoseok. Did You lie(//^//).and that there is only 4 chapters left.. now 3 chapters have become..so there is only one left(TT_TT)
OH MY GOSH(//^//) I listen right now 'That's not me' by Aaron Yan.and I just can't.this song fits so perfectly to this whole situation..Tsumi and Taehyung. And gosh I'm crying(TT_TT)
I cried whole time when I read those chapters. Coz I know that end is coming. And I just can't see happy ending for this..but I believe in you and I hope you'll write happy ending(//^//)♥
Taehyung baby(//^//) you had To die twice(//^//) I'm so sorry V (TT^TT) I hope you Feel alot better now. But why Hoseok, Why? please Tsumi!! Save him!!! Taehyung take over of Tsumi and Save Hoseok!!!! Please!!!!!!!!(//^//) I'm begging you!! PLEASE WRITE HAPPY ENDING!!(//^//)♥
why Hoseok's and Taehyung's plan didn't work. Why Tsumi is so dickhead(TT_TT) I don't like it(//^//)
this cliffhanger(//^//) Please update soon(//^//) I just can't handle my feels*^* I need to know how this will end(//^//)
I can't stop crying..I feel so sorry for them all(//^//) They have To suffer so much..just because Taehyung's darkside..it's not Taehyung's fault..but why(//^//)
and those letters from fans(//^//) they made me cry even more..for a moment I thought that this was really real..that those were really real fans' letters to Taehyung's grave(//^//)
why I can't stop crying? And Hoseok is so cute but..I don'twant him To die(//^//) please don't kill him too(TT^TT)
I think I'm going to watch "BTS BOMB"s so I can live freely and that I can realize that Taehyung and Hoseok is really alive. And that this is just story.this is not reality!!!
JustAnotherFangirl46 #6
Chapter 9: OMG!!!! I LITERALLY CANNOT EVEN!!! THIS IDEA IS AMAZING!!!
kkaepsongyehet #7
Chapter 9: .... *Blank*
Now everything is starting to became clear.
I think I'll leave my next big comment when the 3 last chapters are out. Is that okay? Or then I can't just leave without commenting... but anyway..this chapter.. I have no idea why you said that this chapter Is messy?(0_o) it wasn't.. Or maybe my thoughts Are so twisted that I understood everything right away..? I don't know...But I'm so happy everything is becaming clearer to Hoseok And Taehyung♥ But where the did Taehyung fall?
We'll see in the next chapter^^
kkaepsongyehet #8
Chapter 8: Do you know that feeling when you've wrote good comment and then your ing phone thinks that it's time to shut off? And then your comment is disappeared? Well that just happened to me♥ love it♥
okay..I'll try to remeber what I wrote in that comment..
first of all..Tsumi is se scary>^<
and I'm happy Hoseok started to open up to members..now he don't have to suffer alone and he has ppl to talk about thinks^^♥
and now members can help him coz they know what kind of situation he's in^^♥
so happy^^
I think that tais story is starting now^^ you know what I mean? It's started Already..but I think that now is Going to happen something. And.. I don't know>\\\\<
this chapter Was so awesome♥♥
anyway can't wait next chapter♥♥
kkaepsongyehet #9
Chapter 7: Oh.my.gosh!!!
Do NOT say that Tsumi is behind of taehyung's weakening?? So..Tsumi is more powerful and Taehyung is weaker>\\\<
Bwaaaaaaaah>\\\\\< I just...My feeellzzzzzz>\\\\<
can't wait the next chapter>_<
kkaepsongyehet #10
Chapter 6: Tsuuuuumiiiiiii*^* badumzzzz(*0*)
He's so scary but so poor at the same time...poor-Tsumi(//^//) no...no poor..but...harmless?? Nope..he's not harmless..but now I found the right word: Pathetic!! He's pathetic.. I think I'm only one who feels sorry for Tsumi?>_<
He's scary. But I think he have his reasons to be like that... and I believe we'll find out why he's like that^^
Poor-Jin(TT_TT) he feels bit quilty(//^//) He should not!!
Namjoo too(//^//)
Jungkook when he sing to Hoseok♡_♡ so cute♥♥ so caring♥♥
and your reply to my other comment! I know what you mean by that. That you describe them like you'd like them To be in real life!! I think same way..I mean. I'd like them To be that caring and sweet persons..And I think they are like that in real life too^^
anyway shall we continue^^
That hat♥♥♥ it's going to be in very big part!! Right?^^ I know it's going to be^^
but HOW THE IS TSUMI BECAMING A LIVING CREATURE??? Woaaaah.. it's scary but fascinating^^