Make It Better

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Yoongi splashed water on his face, telling himself to it up as he turned to leave, but he was stopped when a cool hand touched his forehead. His eyes shot up and his cheeks turned a darker shade of red as he met with Namjoon's stare. He had been struggling with his secret feelings for their leader for a long time, but in his current state, he couldn't help but revel his Namjoon's soft touch, regardless of the fact that it was purely platonic. 

 

This is a Sugamon containing sap,  internal angst and ultimately fluff. Namjoon forces Yoongi to go to the hospital when he's sick and feeling ensue. Clichè I know, but still.

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Title: Make It Better
 
Rating: PG  ^^
 
Pairing: Sugamon
 
Disclaimer: This story contains guys with feels for other guys.If that makes you uncomfortable find the back button now. I am not responsible for any feeling of butthurt. Also I don't have any rights to BTS cause if I did the next photobook would be...well it'd be super y.

Foreword

Author’s Note: 

Usually this is where I talk about where I got my inspiration from to write this story, but I'm not sure how to explain this one without sounding like a . Basically I read this fic where one of the characters get sick and instead of the other person taking care of him, he has a long whiny monologue about he's tired and burdened while the other dude seriously needs to see a doctor. Needless to say I wasn't a fan, but still every author is allowed to write the characters how they want, which is why instead of complaining about it I just decided to write my own story where Yoongi gets sick and Namjoon acts like an actual concerned adult instead of a selfish five year old. But regardless, I hope you enjoy the story. ^^

Also before anyone complains about plagiarism. I want to say that every word in this story is my own and the only similarity between my story and the one that inspired it is that a character gets sick during practice and has to go to the hospital, which is hardly an original idea. It's like claiming plagiarism because two people wrote about a character falling for the barista at the local coffee shop, or best friends having secret feelings for each other. Concepts can be the same while the stories themselves are completely different. So if you want to accuse me of snatching anything, it better be a weave.

 
Special Thanks:
 
To ShandiCorn: My sister who I force to make all my banners for me. Love you. <3
 
To MissMaize:  For being proof reading my stories, even though you never give any criticism. e_e
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Siskatiska #1
Chapter 1: I dislike make pregnancy also..so nice bluff..he.he
xokittenxo #2
Chapter 1: I'm loving the little mini epilogues or whatever they're called at the end of your stories ㅋㅋㅋ they give me life xD
youremylovesick #3
Chapter 1: Ah, this was so cute!! Everything about it is perfect. I seriously love the way you write~ ♡
FayeValentine #4
Chapter 1: This is good! ^.^
Please write some more sugamon... if not, maybe Kookiemonster? ;)
Minseokie1 #5
Chapter 1: Haha I also hate mpreg. Why...

Oh the other hand, this was so cute! I'm so happy. Sugar is my precious baby.
Lavandula #6
Chapter 1: Ah, this was really adorable!
The both of them were so in character, and the story is simple but meaningful~
I can see why you like Sugamon, though I probably won't jump ships :D
Blue82 #7
Chapter 1: This is adorable and I could picture it in my mind clearly. Those kisses were extra sweet and the body comments were perfection.
ShandiCorn #8
Chapter 1: Super cute even though I don't know BTS that well. ^^;

Sailor Moon Sayz: Remember kids having an appendicitis is a very serious illness that could be life threatening if untreated. The more you know... cause knowing is half the battle. GI Joe.
Aralosin #9
Chapter 1: Soooo, yeah, another case of long time coming in the reading/commenting section, forgive me?

This was all kinds of sappy, fluffy, happiness. I agree that Namjoon wouldn't just let a friend suffer because he felt put out (or whatever) at being a leader with a sick mate. Anybody in that position, regardless of crushes/feelings, would care if someone they loved was hurt/suffering and want to help them, it's only natural. The fact that you made the nerves and desire for things to go well/be okay was palpable in how they acted was nice, plus the liplocks were nice spikes of hot thrown in on top of the cute angsting feels. I love how shy they are with each other when you write them, that is until one grows the balls and molests the other. I wouldn't be adverse to a sequel with the ual healing thrown in, but I know better than to push, so whenever the SugaMon muses decide to play, I'll be here to consume. Thanks for the awesome story even if it took me a month to read ^_^;; (really, really sorry it took me so long *praysyouwontkillher*)
MissMaize #10
Chapter 1: My feeeeeeeeeels! Sugamon is so damn adorbs. Yeah, I said it--*adorbs*. That's the proper word to describe them, yup yup! I love how Yoongi just goes for it--Getcho man, Yoongi, yaaaaasssssssssss! And Namjoon don't play when it comes to his Boo! Don't worry, Yoongi! Namjoon is going to take great care to properly nurse you back to health, so get them passports (meaning lots of lube & condoms) ready for that trip to Hong Kong, teeheehee!^__~ Ahhhh, it's such a shame that they have those nifty open-back hospital gowns for the patients when they're recovering too, because they provide such easy access for the ytimes... ;___;

And as for that time you trolled me, I'm totally picturing them on the Maury Show, complete with Rapmon jumping up and down before breaking into a kpop girl group dance when Maury reveals the results that yes, "You *ARE* the father!*, hahahaha!! XP

*throws extra sparkly glitter and skips away*
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