Meeting The Rest Of N.E.T

Here To Spy
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            It’s been about a week since I got the letter from The Director. Seth and I just arrived in Korea. A middle-aged man greeted us at the airport and he took us to this hotel that we’re in. His name was Song Jae Gu, but he said we could call him Jae. After our introduction, he told us that since it’s late into the night, he’d come back in the morning to pick us up. Then, we’d go to meet the other members of the NET.

            I collapse face down on the satiny bed, feeling exhausted after the 14 hours flight from Northern ia to Seoul. Unfortunately, Seth and I must share a room. The SAI must be on a budget or something, but they could’ve at least gotten a room with two beds. There isn’t even a kitchen…

            “Hey Leah, I want the bed. You can get the sofa,” Seth smiles as he sets down the luggage.

            “Are you kidding? Is that’s how you treat women?” I question, with an irritated look on my face. “Make them sleep on the uncomfortable, lumpy couch?”

            “Come on. It's not that bad. Look.” Seth flops down on the tiny sofa that looks quite old. The thick, curvy lines intertwine with one another, making a sort of ivy-like pattern.

            “There’s a dark stain near your ear,” I say mischievously. I wonder what left the mark on the ugly, pale yellow and puke-green fabric. Seth jumps up from the couch.

            “Ug, really?! What is that?”

            “It’s kind of large. Maybe someone threw up on it. Hehe.” I start jumping on the bed. The metal springs in the bed make squeaky noises.

            “Stop it. You’ll disturb the people under us,” he grabs my hand and pulls, causing me to lose my balance.

            “Seth!” I ungracefully fall on top of him.

            “Your knee! Ow!”

            “Huh?” My knee is pressing down on his groin. “Oh! Sorry.” I quickly get up. “Are you okay?”

            “NO!” Seth stays on his side, .

            “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to. Here, get on the bed. You can sleep on there tonight. I’ll take the couch.”

            “If I can’t have kids, I blame you,” he glares at me.

            “I said I was sorry!” He just scoffs and looks away. “Well, I’m going to go take a shower now, Seth.”

            “Okay, I think I’ll shower tomorrow morning. I didn’t get much sleep on the plane, so I’m going to bed now. Just let me brush my teeth before you shower.”

            “All right.” I open up my large, maroon suitcase to find a bag filled with toiletries. Inside are mostly bottles of lotion, shampoo, conditioner, soap, and of course, perfume. I’m obsessed with scented objects. Things like candles and hand sanitizers from Bath & Body Works are my guilty pleasure. I spend way too much money on them, but they can be so relaxing, especially on days before big tests. A bubble bath with sweet-smelling candles strewn across the bathroom can really distress you.

            Seth comes back and taps me on the head.

            “Aren’t you going to change into your pajamas?” I ask while he crawls into bed.

            “Nah, I’m way too ti…”

            “What? Tired?” His eyes were closed and I assume that he’s already asleep. I gather my things and chuckle to myself as I make my way to the bathroom.

            The hot water beats down on my skin, making me realize just how weary I am. Stream swirls around me. My hands massage the shampoo into my long, black hair. I breathe in the tangy smell and sigh contently. I better hurry up and get some rest too. Hopefully, I’ll make a good first impression on the other members of NET tomorrow.  

 

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            The cold seeps into my silky blanket, the one my mom got for me as a going-away gift. She should’ve bought a blanket with a thicker material. She knows I get cold really easily. I pout shamelessly at the ceiling. Why did I ever let Seth sleep on the bed? I’m such an idiot. My head turns towards his direction. Seth’s silhouette rises and falls rhythmically.

            I gather up my blanket and shamble all the way to his bedside. He wouldn’t mind if I slip under the covers…Right? My head nods, convincing myself that it’s okay. I carefully lift the corner of the cover and snuggle up against his back.           

 

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            ♪I was the moon. You were the sun. I can’t seem to shine, now that you’re gone.♪

            “Leah? The alarm clock on your phone is ringing.”

            “Eh?”

            “Turn it off.”

            “Okay.”

            I continue to lie perfectly still, refusing to move.  My head hurts a bit and Seth kept kicking me last night.

            ♪Now I’m out of orbit cause you left with no words. Are you somewhere better now? ♪

            “Leah…”

            “Hold on, this is my favorite part.”

            ♪Can you save me now? I get lost up in the clouds. Can you save me now? You were my gravity. ♪

            “Oh my gosh,” exclaims Seth. He reaches over me and turns off the alarm. “Do you always do this?”

            “Do what?”

            I turn to face him.

            “Not turn off your alarm clock or pick up the phone because you like your ringtone so much.”

            “Yeah,” I say sheepishly. I must admit. That happens so many times, mainly the phone scenario. Maybe I should change the ringtone into something more generic…but I really like this song. That’s why I use it for almost everything. Ugh. So many conflicted thoughts!

            “Why is your face like that?”

            Seth imitates my ugly, indecisive expression.

            “Huh? Oh, sorry. It’s nothing.”

            “Why did you have your alarm clock on?”

            “I wanted to be prepared for when Jae arrives. He never told us what time specifically and I didn’t want to call him since he was probably asleep or busy, so...yeah.”

            He nods and looks me right in the eye.

            “Leah…I need to tell you something. Something really important. ”

            He tucks a strand behind my ear.

            “Haha, uh…it feels like we’re in a telenovela…What is it?”

            Could he say what I think he’s going to say? I squirm anxiously.

            “Your breath stinks. I advise that you go brush your teeth immediately,” he says with a poker face.

            “It’s not like yours smell like a field of flowers!”

            He sticks his tongue out at me and smacks my face with a pillow. My hand clutc

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IM SO SORRY FOR THE INACTIVITY. :((( some stuff happened. I hope you can understand...

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ABstylePanda
#1
Chapter 3: I know im a bit late for discovering this, but please update, the story is good. I love the way you write. And im really interested to know what will happened next. Ogad theres still seventeen and i love seth and leah alreadyyy. I ship them together. I hope you finish the storyy. I would definitely recommend it to my friends. But author u need to update pleasseeee. Gad so many scenarios going on in my mind XDDDDD
rocksolidpanda #2
Chapter 1: Okay I am so sorry this has taken me so long. I'm going to a con in like a week and I've been crazy busy getting stuff ready and working extra shifts at my job to have money for it. So here is my quickie, first impressions review of your story. I think you have a lot of potential as an author and I commend you for not only creating two original characters, but for also creating such an elaborate setting and world for them. I will say that 1st person is probably one of the most difficult things to read and write and it shows a bit in this story. I've noticed that many authors tend to trail off in their main characters own stream of thought too often when writing in 1st person because it is so easy to feel as if they are your own thoughts, this creates a lot of unnecessary detail in my opinion and you do that a few times. But fear not! We all have that problem, I'm positive my stories do it even without being in 1st person.
The last criticism I have is to watch out for being too larger-than-life or unrealistic with your characters. It's tempting to make them super impressive and flawless because they're your babies, you made them up and they are a part of you, but it leaves zero room for development and growth within the character. Don't feel bad about giving them flaws or something that they are just average at. This also applies to dialogue, but for the most part you do a good job of making sure to keep the dialogue context appropriate (meaning that the characters speak casually to themselves but to their parents or other authority figures they take on different speech patterns).
I look forward to reading more, seeing what changes you make, and how these characters grow! Happy writing! X3
rainbowkimchi #3
Chapter 2: Hello,Sorry I took so log to review your story,I have not been on a computer (I'm on my tablet) so please excuse my spelling mistakes.First off I think that your story is starting off very nicely,Also I see you are very professional and that's qualities a reader would love to see in an author.Secondly the story has a lot of details and I understand why you put so many details,You want to help your readers understand.Lastly I love that you don't have many spelling/punctuation mistakes (Even though I don't really see any).I wish you success on your story,Good luck!
WenZhen #4
Chapter 2: Hi, sorry this took a while. I'm not used to reading beyond my fandom tbh haha. Generally speaking, your fic is clear and straightforward so that makes it easy to follow. It's a little excessively detailed though I feel, there are many things that don't really need so much explanation or description. Especially since this is written from a first-person point of view, the focus should be on the protagonist and how she feels rather than on a lot of description of what she sees around her, especially if it's not all that necessary. With such a simple setup for the later scenes, I would also expect the story to move along at a much quicker pace so as not to lose readers (especially new readers who want to see how your story develops before deciding whether to commit to subscribing or not). Especially about your characters, since they seem young and somewhat immature going off on a highly dangerous secret mission it's not helpful to pluck them out from a very "normal" setting with a home, and family etc. It's somewhat unnecessary and just gives you trouble when transposing them from a "normal" to an "abnormal" setting when you could have just jumped straight to action and letting the rest of your story fill in the gaps. Overall, your story sounds interesting but you might lose casual readers as they're unsure of who/what they're supposed to be following. Since Seth & Leah aren't real life people that readers can relate to, you'll have to use the story itself and the excitement of the scenes to convince people to stay on and read... which hasn't really been happening too. Don't be discouraged though, I wish you all the best in your writing :)
izzabellazm
#6
Chapter 2: This is a really nice story .. Can't wait for the next story :p
VinnyCakes
#7
Chapter 3: Oh wow! I haven't read a story that sounds this professional on aff in a really long time! I love this story, it sounds like it could be an actual book! lol There isn't anything I would really say to change or add at this point, this is story is really good that I just can't wait for the next update! I'm definitely going to keep up with this story! Good Job! Props to you, this is a really good story line!
KeitMeg
#8
oh hon, as much as I'd love to sub and read, i still can't because you see, i'm not into hetero fics (read: )
however, im wishing you luck! you are already having many subs and upvotes, it's wonderful!
nina147
#9
Chapter 3: This is a very good story and I can't believe you kill my maknae Sehun. Also I think i'm shipping Seth and Leah... too cute!! Overall I'm impressed.
secret-owl #10
Chapter 1: Nice story! ^_^ Your writing is really good, the plot seems interesting, and you're one of the few authors on here who has good grammar and spelling. It's like reading a book. The writing is rich and detailed.