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hello my amazing readers, i will keep it real short. i finally feel like making a chaptered story (at least 10 chapters) out of this one-shot. the idea is to expand on the events, focus on both jaejoong and yunho's thoughts more. do you think i should give it a try? if yes, what as a reader do you prefer more - when chapters are in chronological order or is it fine when the events have time gaps and jump between past, present and future? please don't be indifferent and express your opinion in the comments!

 

 

 

 

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blurryeyes #1
Chapter 3: Omg, I've read the chaptered one before this. Spoiled ending?XD My question in Gehena has just been answered here. Idk what to feel upon knowing Yunho's unexpected death...
AmberGem #2
Chapter 2: thank you soo much ^^ i was really hoping that you would make a chaptered story :-)
i really love this story and i enjoy it so much, i prefer chronological order because i'm french so english is not my first language so when there are time gaps it's a little confusing for me and it become harder to understand the story, but in both cases i'll definitely read your story because it s sooo good~~
anyways please update soon, i m looking forward it! Good luck <3
QueenQri
#3
Chapter 2: Yes please! i would love to read the chaptered fic.
and it would be good if you made mix of both.
i really like how this one-shot was very well written and I'll be waiting for the chaptered one :) good luck
TheLadySilver
#4
Chapter 2: It's good idea that to expand this into chaptered fic. Personally, I think a combination of both would be good for this plot. The general flow of the story would be in chronological order, and then maybe with some flashbacks here and there most especially for Jaejoong's part. It makes sense, since Jaejoong's character has existed for eternity, he would his life with Yunho would at times trigger certain flashbacks in his past lives that made somewhat of an impact to him. Also, taking into consideration the tone of the oneshot, I think the story world probably lean on being a bit Jaejoong-centric. But it would be interesting to read about everything that happened between the two of them in Yunho's POV. It be interesting to know if Yunho ever thought over about Jaejoong telling him that he is not exactly human. Oh well, that's just me. Sorry if I may have went a bit overboard with suggesting and all. But I am really looking forward to a chaptered version of this fic. I was really intrigued by the plot. Anyways, good luck with it! I hope we won't have to wait too long before we get to read the first chapter of it. Hehehe. But hey! No pressure! Again, good luck! :D
Chidachic #5
Chapter 2: I'd definitely love to read a chaptered version !!! I don't have any preferences just do what you think will be best and I'll be looking forward to it , good luck :)
Rose_17 #6
Chapter 1: Keep up the good work ;)
AmberGem #7
Chapter 1: i love it, thanks :)
StephLovesKCulture
#8
This is one special story, to say the least, but I must admit, I did like it though.. :)
tiabarty #9
Please continue the story.
the story seems interesting.
StarrySeraphim21
#10
this is very interesting. Can't wait for the update.