Chapter 1: That was so creative omg! I don't know why I didn't comment I this when I finished reading it! >_<

Chapter 1: Oh gosh... ; 7 ; the heartbeat monitor readings...! So clever! No idea if it was intended, but I swear it picks up the story like you CANNOT believe. It's already such a bloody good read, but the clear shortening of the page breaks there in the heart rate readings is just... so brilliant. It really adds its own little metaphoric charm here.
Really enjoyed the idea as a whole, and Yoongi... waah! My heart aches for him. What a nice theme though, and you really pulled it off well. Great job!

Chapter 1: It's a shame that it's just a one shot but you did great writing it :)

Chapter 1: I thought Suga was a serial killer


Now I know different. Beautifully written, this is an amazing story.

Short but amazing. Enough to touch my heart. I liked your style and how you write about yoongi's personality in your story

Chapter 1: That was a great read! The poor Yoongi... ah I really got into the story, you did a good job writing this :3

Chapter 1: Well, that was both sad and beautiful. I enjoy your writing style! :)

Chapter 1: Oh! Yoongi killed himself?!?! How sad. This was incredibly short, but you managed to pack enough emotion in it in a simplistic way. Good job! ^^