Deep Breath

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Description

Title: Deep Breath;
Genre(s): mystery, supernatural;
Length: one-shot;
Rated: PG-13;
Characters: Kim Jongin, Ares, and Helios;
Word Count: 1 612.
Written On: January 14 2015;
Edited On: March 14 2015;
Short Description: Kim Jongin was just a hard-working dancer, who tried to come up with a spectacular choreography. Little did he know, what the dance routine would unleash inside of him.

 

 

Ares (Ἄρης, Árēs) is God of war, bloodshed, and violence;

Helios (Ἥλιος, Hḗlios) is the personification of the Sun.

 

 


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Foreword

 

His mouth was forcefully opened again. He tried to close it with his own hands but they
were trashed away and held loosely in the air by ghostly fingers. The young man had no idea that
now Helios was reducing human's resistance as Ares spread evil inside of him with one deep breath.

Let us in, Kim Jongin,” the guy heard venomous tone.

 

 

Jongin lost consciousness, still seated onto the chair. Just before his mind went
blank, he could swear seeing charred remains of his family. He heard
distant and manic laugh of the devil and now the impure light.

“Feel the abyss, Kim Jongin...”

 

 

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Comments

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LonelyCrow #1
Awesome. So in the end, Ares won right? "The impure light"?
suzyelf
#2
I loved how all of the plot is based on Kai's performance! Usually I would complain about not having enough plot but this is perfect in that way ! I can imagine Ares and Helios battling over Kai while he perform that choreo! It's haunting and refreshing and different. Good luck with the contest. ^^
JEONJUNGK00K #3
Chapter 1: Gave me goosebumps while reading this. Why do i feel like this is just a constant battle within Jongin himself. Whether to give up or try harder.
littlemrstaro97
#4
Chapter 1: Woaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh o.o A really nice and perfect plot~ I likeeeeeeee! :D Keep it up!
Btw, what font were you using for the title of your poster?
Chanti12
#5
Chapter 1: Oh gosh.. I can't even... I don't even know the right words to describe this... this is just freaking amazing and perfect! *applauding while jumping around* I hope you'll continue to write such master pieces!!