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Chances

 

So... uhm... yeah, I didn't do corrections, just do with it. Was lazy and not in mood and whatever, but just... if you wanna have it in your computers, taking your space on the disc, not having to connect to internet to re-read it... here is a download link. It's still the same creepy English you're used to, I didn't change anything. Enjoy ^^

 

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novitan
#1
Chapter 16: This story is just so sad and intense. So.. In the end eunhae and yewook together, sungmin together with henry, and kyu start new life in china with his roommate(who I guess is zhoumi)? Not really like it but the story itself is good so... Good job I guess ^^
Elsweyr
#2
<3
kfanatic #3
I like the story a little to much pain, but very realistic. I just wish kyumin had stayed together:'(.
simbasheart #4
*sobbinghard* broken kyumin?? :((
i really enjoyed reading dis but the last part broke my heart :((((
sequel pls?? ;AAA; *begs*
saranghamnida3 #5
Hated Kyuhyun here... It's actually his faul cause he's stupid.why would he have ___ of all things... Henry is a good guy... I'm actually glad sungmin didn't accept kyu anymore... But I'm still a kyumin fan very much except for his fix.. Kekeke nice job! :D
LaLLorona
#6
I did not expect this... I am shocked :D Kyumin is broke at the end? I dont know how I'm going to get over from this.. Ahahha,nice story!!!!
SunaoTeam #7
that's good. it means the end worked ^^ yeey y black-haired 6jib Hyukjae!
you're talking about me here babe, you know how i am at school. i WILL have to study >.<
too bad. they're not gonna have baby even if i went crazy and wrote a happy end for them. it's one of the ends i hate the most.
Dena1a
#8
yeah you kinda did, a person forgets all of the torture they've been through after reading that fluff and the change of color xD
okay, i guess it's a bit different kind of angst in the school xD but still a torture. doesn't matter, you won't need much knowledge from previous classes, it was never necessary and i don't think you will need it ;) or at least you have to hope xD
no baby for them? ;A; that sure is sad xD
SunaoTeam #9
that's good. i almost thought you just missed it. hope i saved you poor eunhae heart after all the torture :D (lol fangirling :D)
thanks, i didn't write on plane :DD but even though school IS pure angst, i'm not sure if it's the right type of angst for layhan, lol :D and hey, i'll have to start study a bit. forgot everything already :D
i know, thanks ^^
lol yeah, it sounded wrong :DD no baby for the two of them :DDD
Dena1a
#10
yeah i know, it just striked me since it was used a lot in the anime and i loved that anime so i remember..I DID! and i wanted to comment on that but then got second thoughts because i wasn't a hundred percent sure about his color at the end of the last part ;A; but i noticed, stopped reading and enjoyed the change and what it meant (yeah, and a bit of fangirling maybe appeared too xD)
i'm not forcing you to start writing it on the plane ok xD i'm sure you'll find enough time for that in chemistry/georaphy/whatever subject you don't need to pay attention to in school ;) or at home if you won't have the best athmosphere for angst in the lessons (but come on, school is pure angst xD)
yeah, more real the better xD
good, it's nice when you appreciate you work ;)
that's easy! you're gonna make another baby with luhan and yixing! (i know how wrong it sounds but you know what i mean xD)