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MINHO LAY ON THE FLAT OF HIS BACK ON THE COOL FLOOR, HIS MOUTH HANGING HALFWAY OPEN AS HE TRIED TO CATCH HIS BREATH. His heart was still racing, the beats hard and fast that he wondered if it would eventually burst out of his chest. Beads of sweat trickled from his brow making their way towards his temples. He would wipe his forehead if only he could but his limbs remained planted on the floor’s surface, not budging from the spread eagle position that he found himself in after all that exertion. 

 

He continued staring at the wood beams that held up the vaulted ceiling until his eyelids drifted shut in fatigue. But instead of sleeping his mind wandered, going over the last six months, questioning his motives, his plan. 

 

The plan.

 

It was the only thing that kept him sane in the last year of his service. The plan. 

 

And her.

 

Her.

 

He sighed. 

 

Was it all worth it? Would it be worth it?

 

A female voice cut through the haze of his thoughts. 

 

“Get up.” she commanded, her voice echoing off the walls.

 

He slowly opened his eyes to the woman standing over him. 

 

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kit_kat #1
Chapter 10: Okay...I have to admit to not having read since the beginning and I need to...I remember that I found it funny that you made Min Ho learn to dance because I always make fun of his dancing in my ff.

Your dance descriptions are so detailed an breathtaking...I was wondering if he was going to catch her. Are you a dancer?

Your details and the way you write their emotions are so good. I can see why branwen is your inspiration. Your Shin Hye reminds me of her Shin Hye.

Ok...need to read from start to finish...and then blame you for my delayed chapter of MTR.
iloveness
#2
Chapter 10: Thanks for the update
branwen #3
Chapter 10: I am breathless.
Soompi is slow these days, not all writers are updating, my own fanfic is depressing, and we are swept up by the busyness of our daily lives. I wondered if Minshinners are having a hard time shipping, or are they losing faith.
But then again, great writers like you give us huge presents today, and you brought back all the positive in me. This really wonderful and brilliantly written story just left me breathless. You are so freaking good! Aside from those detailed words of the dance steps, I love that you focused more on the nerves, their emotions, how they turned from nervous wrecks to giddy lovers dancing on the floor, knowing that they can trust each other whenever they take that leap of faith.
You may have started a bit later but you are one freaking good writer. You have to realize that. And write more. LOL. Now i realized I probably pressured you into writing the dance sequence, sorry if I did, but well, I'm not that sorry coz I know you can do it and it turned out so so great!!
I hope you're feeling so much better. I know you're probably busy but you still managed to write this beautiful fic and make us happy today. Thank you so much. Happy New Year and Happy Valentines Day!
estrelitacristino
#4
Chapter 10: Thanks much for the update writer-nim!Happy heart's day!!!^-^
gelai5 #5
Chapter 10: Thank you for updating, you made this day more lovelier as it is. Happy Valentines day Chinguyah!!! Hope you have a present for Shinhye-ah, another update perhaps kekeke....
mmco67 #6
Chapter 10: thank you! you granted my request, well, this is close enough! hope all is well with you. here's wishing for a more frequent update than before! cheers!
avrylle #7
Thank you for the update dear. I so love this song now...^_^...Maligayang Araw ng mga PUSO!!!
gelai5 #8
Chinguyah, where are you? Update please.....
mmco67 #9
It's been a while, how are you? So much anticipation after the last chapter. Hope you have time to update soon!
valkyries212 #10
Chapter 9: I just discovered this story today.. and i am so happy i did! Its an awesomely beautiful love story, thanks! And i love those small author foot notes, seems like you have a beautiful personality too! Wit + humour!