Ghost(BAP)

Writing Boot Camp(startover)
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The boys are tired and haggard as they enter their dorm, and each one is lugging their own bags and luggage. They just came home from their trip from Mexico. They all stop at the entrance to remove their shoes and while only wearing socks continue on carrying their luggage inside.

As they enter their dorm, not one among them notice that something follows them inside.

Everyone is standing in the living room each one holding the handle of their luggage, each one ready to pull it to their own rooms. 

In their mids, something is listening in on their conversation.

The youngest Zelo can't help express his hunger, "I am so hungry."

Young Jae agrees with him, "Me, too. I'm starving."

Yong Guk knew how the whole members feel, "I think we all are. Let's order some take out. I am too tired to go out." 

Him Chan suggests, "I really want some black noodles." 

Dae Hyun gives his own suggestion, "Chicken, I really want some mouth watering fried chicken." 

Jong Up gives his own two cents, "Can't we order some pizza instead,

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adlinriz #1
Chapter 9: lol, you got me there. I really thought Joon was killing someone.... well.... to be in fact, he is, but not literally. And lol at when he said he's hungry 'cause it made my hungry too though I'd already ate a couple of hours before. xD
adlinriz #2
Chapter 8: True the words of dream_keeper88, at times I experience that a lot and it frustrated me that I even thought of creating a device/thing to project our mind. And a little correction here, it's suppose to be 'exhales' not expel. Hope it'll help ^^
dream_keeper88
#3
Chapter 8: It takes practice to capture the image in our heads. And you're doing just that so keep going ^-^
adlinriz #4
Chapter 7: hey, sorry I'm not commenting for a while. Got caught up on some things. And would you look at that, besides getting 100 words a day, you managed to achieve more longer words. Bravo to you authornim.
P/S: sorry for some odd use of words, English is not my mother tounge
dream_keeper88
#5
Chapter 6: Looky, you wrote more than 100. It keeps increasing every day! And look at the variety of ideas you got, featuring different artists too. Keep writing.
adlinriz #6
Chapter 3: Ooo... a stalking ghost. That's... AWESOME!! Well, as long as it's not me it's stalking xP. Oh! Just being curious, now my lil bro is watching Running Man, and one of the guest is Bobby (they introduce him as, King of Soul, I think) Is he, the one you wrote about before?
adlinriz #7
Chapter 2: Wow, I must say that's a lot of survival program, if you ask me. That's how tough it is to be an idol huh. Just thinking of waking up at dawn and get so... little of sleep, already sounds so tiring. And I haven't even started with the stage nerves and people trying to intrude your life *cough*paparazi*cough*. This is why I kind of look up to them :D

P/S: is this true? Umm.. Sorry for asking 'cause I'm not that into Korean idols 'cause I only like their songs. and... I hear more English songs too. Sorry.
adlinriz #8
Chapter 1: kudos to you authornim. And is it much of me to ask for longer words or a continuation of the chapter or it doesn't go that way? xD

P/S: is Mark like... have a crush on Bambam O°O
dream_keeper88
#9
Chapter 1: Now you do have to update daily xD
adlinriz #10
Good luck, authornim~ Man... 100 words a day... That's tough... But anyway, hope you'll succeded. Fighting!!! ^^