Night (B.I.)

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Night (B.I.)

The darkness is B.I.'s friend, a lone companion that keeps him company in his solitude. 

Walking in the forest alone in the dark,  while emptying his mind of any thought. His eyesight and hearing can pinpoint things from a distance. He keeps walking following the sound of water.

 He does not wish to be disturbed by his friends, and most probably they are looking for him at that moment, all the while they are probably worried about him. 

He wants the solitude as long as possible, but to his consternation it does not last long at all for they have found him. He could only sigh in his frustration. Why could they not leave him alone even for just awhile. 

He knows they are coming for he can feel their presence. He wants to leave and spirit away to another place, it is so hard to forebear such constraints, but what is the use when they will find him again. It is better to stay right there than spend an arduous effort in losing them. 

He continues to walk mindful of his coming unwanted intruders. 

He reaches a clearing and found the enchanting falls that he was hearing. He wants to take a dip in the clear pond. Slowly he takes all his clothes off  while  he watches  the water as it glimmers in the night. Slowly one foot after another he steps into the water enjoying the coldness and he turns to float and watches the moon and stars. 

Eyes are on him watching him.

He knows they have reached him. <

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adlinriz #1
Chapter 9: lol, you got me there. I really thought Joon was killing someone.... well.... to be in fact, he is, but not literally. And lol at when he said he's hungry 'cause it made my hungry too though I'd already ate a couple of hours before. xD
adlinriz #2
Chapter 8: True the words of dream_keeper88, at times I experience that a lot and it frustrated me that I even thought of creating a device/thing to project our mind. And a little correction here, it's suppose to be 'exhales' not expel. Hope it'll help ^^
dream_keeper88
#3
Chapter 8: It takes practice to capture the image in our heads. And you're doing just that so keep going ^-^
adlinriz #4
Chapter 7: hey, sorry I'm not commenting for a while. Got caught up on some things. And would you look at that, besides getting 100 words a day, you managed to achieve more longer words. Bravo to you authornim.
P/S: sorry for some odd use of words, English is not my mother tounge
dream_keeper88
#5
Chapter 6: Looky, you wrote more than 100. It keeps increasing every day! And look at the variety of ideas you got, featuring different artists too. Keep writing.
adlinriz #6
Chapter 3: Ooo... a stalking ghost. That's... AWESOME!! Well, as long as it's not me it's stalking xP. Oh! Just being curious, now my lil bro is watching Running Man, and one of the guest is Bobby (they introduce him as, King of Soul, I think) Is he, the one you wrote about before?
adlinriz #7
Chapter 2: Wow, I must say that's a lot of survival program, if you ask me. That's how tough it is to be an idol huh. Just thinking of waking up at dawn and get so... little of sleep, already sounds so tiring. And I haven't even started with the stage nerves and people trying to intrude your life *cough*paparazi*cough*. This is why I kind of look up to them :D

P/S: is this true? Umm.. Sorry for asking 'cause I'm not that into Korean idols 'cause I only like their songs. and... I hear more English songs too. Sorry.
adlinriz #8
Chapter 1: kudos to you authornim. And is it much of me to ask for longer words or a continuation of the chapter or it doesn't go that way? xD

P/S: is Mark like... have a crush on Bambam O°O
dream_keeper88
#9
Chapter 1: Now you do have to update daily xD
adlinriz #10
Good luck, authornim~ Man... 100 words a day... That's tough... But anyway, hope you'll succeded. Fighting!!! ^^