The Red Bullet

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Foreword

An epic action orientated love story with robots/cyborgs, spies, dictators, and assassination attempts.

In a futuristic world ruled by a cruel man, an underground rebellion known as BTS plots to overthrow him. But when that same man decides to send a spy to infiltrate their group and kill one of them, things begin to change, secrets are revealed and lives are on the line.

All alone in a group of killers, there is only one choice.

Trust no one and avoid the Red Bullet.

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Kawaiiworld #1
Chapter 11: Ugh!!! I need the next chapters!!!! This is so good!!!
pandaKuku #2
Chapter 11: Ok .... the story end.... though ma curiousness still continue...=_= which she end up with....
Nice story author... :D
Arashika #3
Chapter 11: I was quite impressed by this story!

Just would like to point out that there's a few small inconsistencies in your story- although it might just be me not reading carefully enough.

For instance: wasn't Fei still in her robotic mode with no emotion other than her duty? When did she get back the majority of her emotions? I know she was still uncertain about her love for Yoongi until the end, but when did she get the ability to laugh and tease back?

Another thing: when Snigdha finds out about Iseul, her ear bud breaks doesn't it? Then later, Iseul contacts Snigdha in an attempt to warn her- but they couldn't have made contact at this point because Snigdha's ear bud was not only broken but stuffed in her pocket.

There's also an instance early on when they dont know Snigdha is an imposter yet, but Yoongi calls her Snigdha instead of Iseul in the hospital after he gets shot.

Also- if Fei can distinguish robots from humans, how come DK couldn't do the same with Snigdha at the beginning?

But these are honestly pretty small things, which can pretty much all be fixed with a line or two, nothing really major. Overall, this entire story is amazing! While the premise is a little unbelievable (I think they'd be able to tell the difference because of the way they act, I didn't see Snigdha getting any training on how to imitate Iseul's habits or speech patterns or anything), the plot is quite intricate, and the twists thrown in were quite unexpected. I never expected Snigdha to be a robot to be honest. I also didn't expect Jing to not only betray them but then turn back around and save them again! All in all, a great job on this story.

I also really enjoyed the way you incorporated their MVs, that was really cool :D

(I would like to say that sometimes the boys were a little OOC for me, but then again characters are open to people's interpretation :P)

Anyways, great job, keep writing! Hope to see more from you in the future :D
Ace_of_Butterfly
#4
Chapter 10: CRYING OVER THIS CHAPTER AHHH!! THIS IS SUPER MEGA AWSOME~~~ AND I LOVE THE OUTCOME OF THIS I MEAN I THINK I CAN IMAGINE ALLREADY WHO WILL END UP WITH SNIGDHA AND WHO ISEUL IS GOING TO CHOOSE <3
I CANT DESCRIBE ANYMORE HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS STORY CAUSE HONESTLLY I CANT FIND ENOUGH WORDS T..T
THEDOUBLEBLISS #5
Chapter 11: Aww cute ending, well dang I wasn't expecting really V and Iseul to be together, but hey! It's adorable just kind of wished there were more jimin and Snigdha moments, That would've been super cute... maybe a bonus chapter? Like maybe your co-author Exoticdreams could write it if you can't??
Sigrid123 #6
Chapter 9: Woah. Plot twist.
Soo... Is Jing the bad one then?-? No, it can't be. Did they brianwash her or something?
btsislife #7
Chapter 9: OMONA THIS IS CRAZYYY~~ ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME HATE EVERYONE THAT I LIKE?!?!ㅠ-ㅠ JING, YOURE SUPPOSED TO BE SWEET AND INNOCENT NOT A BACKSTABBING LIER!!!! AND ISEUL, YOU BETTER STAY GOOD OR ELSE I JUST MIGHT BREAK A PIANO LIKE JUNGKOOK!!! and I feel so bad for Jungkook and Suga :(( this is just UGGHHH :/ AND PRINCESS JIN BECOMING LEADER JIN IS :)))) I CAN NOT HANDLE THIS STORY. ITS TOO GOOD AND URGGHH :)
THEDOUBLEBLISS #8
Chapter 9: Well damn... WTH? Jing, since when was she the bad one? That was Iseul's job, Jing you can't steal! XD
hmm I wonder what the story is behind Jing's betrayal. Definitely wasn't expecting that, she was always so sweet, it gave me a tooth ache! Excited to read the next chapter!! :)
Ace_of_Butterfly
#9
Chapter 9: OMGGG I CANT WHAT IS THIS?!!! THE SUSPENSE, I FEEL LIKE WAITING FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF A SUPER INTENSE MOVIE...
WHY JING, HOW?!!
But lets not forget that this story becomes better with each chapter ;-; Love it!!
Hope you'll update soon, author nim!!