Chapter 1: Why did you have him dead???

it was so sad :( but it's still a really good story

Awww!..so sad but luv it..^^

Melodramatic! I love it! <3

this is so simple and good!<br />
i like your way writing this one shot (:

=O<br />
very sad one shot, but I have to say... I really did enjoy it. (not cuz JaeJoong died! D= heaven forbid! but because of the twist at the end)<br />
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If you have time, I hope you'd read my jaejoong one-shot =)

Wahhh, the twist was powerful! I love it!

wow mommy ang ganda....^^ hehehe<br />
miss you so much.... <br />
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-lhai

Waaaa... mommy!!! I love it... <br />
Your the best ever... <br />
I can't say a word how great <br />
you are the way you write story...<br />
Soooo sweet...<br />
Thanks mommy for sharing your<br />
best piece again... Love ya!!