Kris stared at you lovingly. "I have never felt like this before." You shyly looked away, blushing. "M-me too." Kris chuckled softly. He brushed your hair with his fingers and slowly held you chin up. You looked at him straight into his eyes.

"I love you." He whispered. You felt you heart beat quicken. You never knew you two will end up like this. You love him too and you will tell him just that. You never knew you would fall in love with a man YOU MET FIVE CHAPTERS AGO.

Dear Kris,

Calm your dragon please.

Okay. A character might-though it's a very slim chance-fall in love with another one in just five chapters or so. If a chapter consists of almost 10,000 words then fine, go fall in love. A crush, maybe. But love?

Are you freaking kidding me?

If you're writing about werewolves finding its mate then I have no problem with that. As werewolves supposed to be in love with its mate the moment he laid his eyes on her or something so I'll let the love at first sight thing go away with that.

It's either a character is already in love with another as a backstory or will gradually fall in love as the story progresses. Because hey, if two people-totally strangers-just met and your time frame is barely six months or something, how can they fall in love?

And no, don't give me love is mysterious crap.

Crush, infatuation, like? Possible. But love? Heck, no.

Mak