What about this chapter?

What about it?

Do I need to mark this as 'M'?

Dude, are you kidding?

Dear Writers,

Sometimes, you make me cringe. But on this one rare occassion, you made me laugh out loud.

I was actually being nice by laughing.

Sincerely,

bactosquareone

p.s. I'm still laughing by its ridiculousness.

It is not even a second when I clicked through my stories and open my rant blog just to post this up. Okay, maybe some seconds have passed already but you get what I mean.

I am reading a oneshot just now. And I will not give you the link, the title, or even the author's name because I will pretty much laugh at it.

GOSH. I am so mean.

Conversations in a story, to make it more relatable, needs to be a talk that could take place in real life. I mean, really take place like you could ask people if you talk like this and they would nod and say, yeah sure. If you are actually not sure about the conversation you just typed, read it out loud. If it sounds weird to you, then maybe you should fix it up.

Now, a is a story. A scene is in a story. And scenes doesn't only have moans and grunts. s will be in the mix too. Whether its a loving, sweet mumurs or harsh, cold mutters. But please, there are just some words or expressions that are highly unacceptable in y time.

As an exam