Infinite

My Heart
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Title: Thoroughly Enchanted
Genre: fluffy fantasy
Prompt Used: Those who don't believe in magic will never find it.

 

Taking a deep breath, Howon plopped himself down onto the small bench in his grandfather's backyard and let it out slowly through pursed lips. He hadn't even wanted to come to the countryside, would rather have stayed in Seoul itself and pursued his dream of being a dancer, but when his mother's father grew too sick to care for himself, Howon knew he had no choice. Not in a bad way, either; he truly loved the older man and he would do anything for family, but it was hard to uproot everything and give up all his dreams just because his mother couldn't be bothered to care for her father. She would have sent him to a retirement home without a thought, selling his small country home and continuing on with her life if she had had her way.

And so he had willingly packed his belongings, albeit with a large dose of sadness, and moved in with the elderly man. The last couple of months had been worth it, in his opinion, to be able to spend time with his grandfather as he lived out his last few months in his own home instead of in a sterilized room somewhere. Yes, Howon thought, staring at the forest stretching out beyond the cultured lawn and small white fence - it was all worth it.

His grandfather was resting in the house then, and Howon took the time to enjoy a bit of peace to himself. The sun was falling in the sky with the onset of evening, casting the backyard into shadow. He knew he would need to go in before true dark fell and start on making dinner, but for the moment, he just let himself relax onto the old bench. His eyes fell closed and he leaned his head back onto the rest behind him, enjoying his time alone.

Then a twig snapped. His eyes popped open and his head came up, and he peered into the deepening shadows of the forest. He was certain that the noise had come from beyond the fence, out there in the wilds, but there was nothing there. "Hello?" he called softly, knowing all along that if he got an answer then he would be running for the house to call the police. No one was supposed to be out there at all; that was private property and trespassers were not welcome.

No answer came, except for another snap of a twig. He jumped up off of the bench and took several steps closer to the fence, his eyes narrowing as he tried to see if he could spot anything among the trees. There. Was that a glint of metal, shining out toward him from the trunks of the trees? With a glance back toward the house, his mind going to his sleeping grandfather, he hesitated. Should he really be wandering around in the forest? The noise was probably a cat...

Another twig snapped and before he could stop to think about it more, he stepped over the small fence and moved into the forest. Even as a small child he had been afraid to venture into the woods behind his grandfather's house, mostly because of the stories the old man would tell about dragons who would eat wayward little boys. Now, at twenty-four, he could no longer justify his fear of the forest and so with a gulp to swallow down the inexplicable fear, he moved deeper into the trees.

The metallic glint inexplicably seemed to draw further away the deeper he got into the forest, and he gave a sigh of resignation as he realized that he was going to have to give it up for th time being. He wasn't going to waste time chasing some flicker through the woods when it was falling dark. He turned to head back to the house, intent to put the whole adventure out of his mind, and promptly tripped.

He fell before he could catch himself, something that rarely happened to him. His hands scraped on small pebbles in the dirt and he gave a grunt of pain, accompanied by a quiet curse at himself for being so clumsy. He climbed back onto his feet and brushed the leaves off of his clothing gingerly before he turned his attention to the small cuts pebbled there. They weren't so bad... what had he tripped over, though?

He turned to find the offending object, and his eyes widened in disbelief as he watched the long tail slide across the ground out of his way and back behind the griffin standing before him. "Hi!" it chirped from it's eagle's beak, accompanied by a little wave with one taloned hand, and his eyes nearly popped out. He turned to run then, and instead of tripping, this time he ran into something. Or, someone. He bounced off of a solid

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-Yuan-
#1
Chapter 7: oooooh i remeber your one shot collection!
-Yuan-
#2
i saw a tiny gd in the poster i had to clicke
Amalya
#3
Chapter 8: Bahaha! This was decidedly cute. XD I had no idea what to expect when I saw the update but when I got into it, the whole thing kept getting more delightful. After that intro with the crappy mother anyway. Wench... Good for Hoya though! Especially because it led to such an interesting afternoon and friends after that.

You know me and magical creatures (especially the ones you introduced). hehe I was grinning like an idiot when they introduced themselves too. And Hoya's mental commentary was priceless. Yes, you can think the dragon is y, thank you very much. ;P lol And I really liked that ending too. Such a cute little change of pace from some of your more wrenching tales. ^_^

Great job my dear! <3
Amalya
#4
Chapter 7: D'aw! This was adorable! XD And I totally laughed out loud when Minjun's private side waved the white flag of surrender. So cute! haha

You set the stage so well with this one and it felt like a very believable world. His early home life made me cringe and feel all the sadness and then you filled it with life with his grandfather only to dash my heart against the rocks again. Poor thing. Two times over! Woman... -_- lol But it was interesting seeing his thoughts as he wandered through the house. Felt the loss while he observed and looked for food. When he finally decided to head out (the little details with the clothes were nice too), I suspected what was going to happen but I certainly wasn't disappointed when I was right. haha

I could picture everything at the supermarket really well too. Seeing Taecyeon as a cashier made me giggle but the whole scene with him bumping into the new doctor and whatnot made me smile. Especially the sly way he pulled the bulgogi back and mentioned pie. haha Touche sir. It also had a beautiful ending to a beautiful story.

The one thing I will add is that Minjun's name is missing a letter at one point. If there were other typos, I didn't catch them. Well done my dear! lol <3 A beautiful gift for someone indeed!
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 6: Damn you...This was such a sad story! It was beautiful and I loved it, and it was wonderful how Baro loved him until the very end. This was one of the rare stories that made me tear up, so thanks for that lol...Great story<3.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 5: I loved how you turned this into a story about a girl and the bond she had with her horse. I could feel their excitement and also their pain while reading this. It was so different from anything else I've read on here, and it was refreshing.
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#7
Chapter 5: Okay that was really awesome, I have to say. And the prompt made sense after reading this, Ailee was so sweet with him. And I of course want moooooooooore in this world and plot T^T
Amalya
#8
Chapter 4: Well color me intrigued by more of the Nysh people. haha I certainly enjoyed the way you built the back story for them (including the effects of the poison and their home planet) and described why they had markings on their hands (potentially) as well as the color change in Haewon's eyes. Touche indeed. I'll agree with DGNA as well in that you do have a pretty good handle on science fiction since none of it felt forced and all fit quite nicely with what you were crafting in your world. In that line of thought, I think my only concern was just that, did they not have any sort of system in place to test the atmosphere before they landed on the planet? Or was it all just supposed to be faith (not gonna lie, I was really intrigued by the appearance of a prominent religious figure in the sci-fi genre and I'm a er for a Goddess in stories anyways) and blind luck that allowed them the ability to survive the next planet? That part was a bit fuzzy is all.

There were a handful of typos but those bloody things are just irritating menaces to be sure. The plot was otherwise solid and you've got a beautiful staging ground for further adventures. I really liked the tension you built into the scene as well, with the power struggles between the Lieutenants and Donghyun's ability to read all of their thoughts, essentially, as well as the manners of the Commander in turn. He handled himself with great aplomb and I giggled at his outward show of emotion at the end there. They kind of remind me of elves a little bit, with their constant composure. lol

Well done indeed and I certainly look forward to more of the Nysh in the future!
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#9
Chapter 4: Hmm that was very interesting. I like the people and the science of their planets and travel. They do make me wonder about their culture (suppressed emotions) and the markings on their hands (how do they get it, and are they born with it?), and all in all, I'd LOVE to see more of this O_O
DGNA_Forever
#10
Chapter 4: You really should write more space stories, because you're good at <3. I really liked this story, and the relationship between Donghyun and Haewon was sweet. I loved the end of it, since it offered hope.