Chapter 4: (((U scared me with that opening man wth ;m; I totally expected someone to die orz))))
Im glad he had eric to back him up (((I kept expecting eric to kill minwoo because of ur opening comment and when eric locked the door I was readying myself OTL))))n im really grateful that eric stayed by minwoo ;_;
Chapter 4: "And he loved himself."
That line is so important
Minwoo understanding that his suicide is something he'd probably regret and leave a lot of people in pain was really nicely done. I also believe that the way Eric treated the aftermath was good!
I laughed at the Eric=light sleeper part because
Lol light sleeper and Ric is just not realistic
What a positive conclusion to a fic that deals with rather serious issues! Overall the fic is great, but I found the ending bit to be a little rushed? ?? Not that it came out of nowhere, but more like the buildup wasn't reciprocated enough (ie. try expanding that last monologue part)
Though I'm not one to speak because I'm always rush rush rush
(If it were me this'll end 9000% in a death because I'm trash like that)
Thanks for writing! I enjoyed reading, as per usual ~
Chapter 4: I liked how it ended. But Eric could help him relax more XDDD
The whole chapter was CUTEEEEE... Like VERY CUTE ...
Please write more cute stories like this ^^
Chapter 4: You know... you know, this habit you had to pick up double meanings. Well, I couldn't help think about some not fitting stuffs for such story at such scenes, but... hey. You corrupted me xD
Anywa, I'm happy Minwoo's not dead -it's a great news in itself- but I hope he'll get better with his depression. This thing can really ruin somone, but I'm glad he realized his life was Worth it in the end.
I know how sometimes you feel like nothing matters and there's no purpose at continuing, but having such feeling stuck on you for months... it mess you up and thank you Eric once again for being there.
Chapter 3: YES ! Eric's in the house xD
Finally, I was so desperatly praying for something/someone to come to Minwoo's rescue. He was so determinate and scared of what he wanted to do that he needed this little something that would stop him before it was too late.
Thank you Eric, thank you, thank you, thank you. Let me hug you and kiss you and worship you and give you my complete gratitude for being there when Minwoo needed you the most.
You made me so tensed with these chapters. Letting me Wonder and fear what Minwoo would do (even if deep down I knew you wouldn't dare kill him) I felt his pain and depression and I wanted so badly grab him and hug him to stop him from doing it. But in the end Eric did it *relieved sigh*
I just realize how worried and stressed I actually was because of your story xD. It's like a weight just vanished from my chest, thank God!
I hope Minwoo will get the needed help now and he will be alright ='(
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