The Date ^__^

Endless Love

DIRA     ILAN     OTHER

[They arrived around half an hour later] 

Okay. We'll see each other at the entrance around 7. Anything goes wrong call me imidiatley.

Okay. Thank you noona. 

Baby...where is you sister going? 

Ha? Oh she's going to meet up with her friends. Don't worry. She will be around. So what are we going to do 1st? 

Urmm.. let get something to eat. I'm super hungry. Haven't had my breakfast yet. 

Ohh my poor baby. Okay lets go. 

[They have the breakfast at OLD TOWN]

[While eating her pancake Dira accidently got choked. She cough so many times.] 

[Looking shocked] Baby? Gwenchana? [Quickly standing up and be beside Dira]

Bianne. I'm fine. Don't worry. 

[What they did that day was: watch Cinema, go play some games, just walk around] 

Baby... can we get some ice-cream? 

Okay. What flavour would you like? 

Urm... I want to have your favourite flavour. [Smiling sweetly] 

Ha? Okay. Hahahaha. Come on then. 

[On the way the walk towards the ice cream shop...Suddenly... BANG! Some accidently bumped into Dira and make her fall to the ground] 

Baby?! [he screams] Yah! [He grab that man's shirt] 

[Dira quickly stand up and try to loosen Ilan's grip] 

Baby..please...control your anger... [She touched Ilan's hand with warmth and Ilan slowly let go] 

Baby.. [Sigh] you should control your anger sometimes. 

Bianne. I was worried. I don't want to see you get hurt...with your condition. 

[Dira starts crying]

Ah~ Dira..? 

Can we forget about my illness just for today and lets have a wonderful date? 

Okay. I'm sorry for bringing it up. Aish~ On my first date with my 'wife' I already made her cry. Okay. To make it up to you I'll do a dance just for you. 

[Dira just laugh] 

[The clock shows that it is 7.25pm and they have safely arrived home. Before Dira enter the house Ilan grab her hand and kiss her on the cheek. As he run towards the car ha made a gesture which made Dira laugh] .....

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Erikaoi #1
One more thing.why everytime I read MGY fic they never use her real name?is it ashame of her real name or what?and it always makes me confused when they do that.please just name it after her.
Erikaoi #2
Don’t want to sound harsh but your writting is childish?as needs more mature plot..with story like that you should make it longer with detail and bring more emotion.I don ’t feel the angst nor romantic only rushing in writting.with more practice you will be good.