Mission on Persuading Omma.

Endless Love

DIRA     ILAN     OTHER

[One morning Dira helps her omma doing all the house from washing the dishes until mopping the floor]

Omma, is there anything else that you need my help?

It's okay honey. You don't have to help me anymore. You should rest. Take care of your health darling. 

[That night] 

Omma...can I ask you something? 

I knew there is something you want since you were 'hard-woking' this morning. Hmm... what is it? 

[Laughing nervously] Actually, I want to ask your permission if I could go to KLCC (Malaysia's shopping mall / famous land mark)  tomorrow with Ilan...

What? absolutely not! 

Omma~ please. may I go? please please... Ilan's sister will supervise us. In case of emergency she will be there.

[An hour later...] 

Dira...you're brother and I (omma) have agreed to let you go to KLCC with Ilan. BUT ... I know you are at home before 8. Do you undertand? 

Ye~ . Kumawo Omma! Saranghaeo! =) 

[When Dira enters her room, she heard music background of 'On Rainy Day' by B2ST. She went towards her phone to see who could be calling in the middle of the night and it said 'Ilan Baby'] 

Yoboseyo? 

Anneyoung Baby [Smiling widely] So... how? are you allowed? 

I'm very sorry baby.. but omma... LET ME ! hahahahha. 

[Sigh] I thought you were going to say no... aigoo~ 

hehehehe. Bianne. 

[In the morning Ilan came to Dira's house around 8 o'clock] 

[Tok tok tok] Yes? 

Aunty is Dira ready? [Giving Dira's omma big smile] 

Ah~ Ye. Dira! Are you read honey? 

[Dira walk down stairs. She look very lovely that day.] 

    

Ommo~ Dira you look very beautiful today. Oh? what a beautiful ring. who gave it? 

[Nervously] Er.. my friend. I'll be going ma. See you at 8. 

And you [ Looking at Ilan with full of seriousness] Look after my precious daughter. Take care of her with you own life. 

I will aunty. I promise! You have my words [Bowing]

[They left the house] 

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Erikaoi #1
One more thing.why everytime I read MGY fic they never use her real name?is it ashame of her real name or what?and it always makes me confused when they do that.please just name it after her.
Erikaoi #2
Don’t want to sound harsh but your writting is childish?as needs more mature plot..with story like that you should make it longer with detail and bring more emotion.I don ’t feel the angst nor romantic only rushing in writting.with more practice you will be good.