Does it almost feel like nothing's changed at all?

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Seunghyun and Jiyong exchange words some words; Seunghyun knows that this will be their last time.

 

Jiyong refuses to believe. 

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A/N: Hello my lovelies! I'm coming back from hiatus for a while, since the world cup has offered me a truckload of inspiration (don't even ask me why or how this is related go gtop--) and so i've decided that i'll be writing an angsty fic. Chances are for a happy ending, will be about 50%. I can promise you that you'll have a good mix of feelings when you read the fic later on so do suscribe if you like the idea. I've been having difficulties with AFF and posting my fic on the previous story i've created (so sorry to the people who had suscribed earlier on) so i made this new one, hopefully i'll be able to add another chapter (i'm done with the fic so all i need to do is to post it) tomorrow when i get access to my computer. I'm terribly sorry for the delay ! :(

 

 

 
"Never say goodbye, because goodbye means going away and going away means forgetting."

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Bianca_MSP #1
To curiosa
daerii #2
Chapter 1: Wow. This was so good? Oh my god. t's beautiful.
MilaWing
#3
I feel like I've been stabbed.

BUT, OTP aside, this was a story of great subtlety, and I am happy I didn't skim over this little jewel.
Thank you for writing this.
primrosepath #4
oh and i forgot to ask, do you happen to be a lit major? I don't usually see these analytical stories on here often. Kudos to you, author-nim, this is really impressive! I felt really compelled to comment the first time i read it so i literally told myself i HAD to comment ^^""
primrosepath #5
wow the amount of quality in this fic is amazing. this i seriously too underrated! one of the best fics i've read so far.
irrelevance
#6
wow...this is so beautiful...i'm actually tearing right now. I love love love the way you described their entire relationship in a single scene, it's extremely impact. I think the length is just right, the mystery in this story is very intriguing, i like how you leave alot of space for the readers to think and find out for themselves. About jiyong's character i feel like he's more of a clingy, self absorbed guy that in the end make seunghyun choose to leave him? Seungri appears to be more empathatic towards him, i think you did a great job in portraying Seunghyun as a good guy on the brink of being villainous? I feel angry at Seunghyun cos he cheated on jiyong and it doesn't seem like he feels sorry but yet i don't really blame him because jiyong seems to be at fault?? (idk is this accurate?) "infalliable indeed" really. just. made. me. crack. "Jiyong isn't all that irreplaceable. (is he really not)." oh that one killed me. it's like seunghyun's doing it out of coercion and he's contemplating on coming back bad then he isn't (isn't that kinda of like what jiyong is doing?) IDK THIS PIECE NEEDS SO MUCH ANALYSIS... my brain hurts.

But really, you're damn talented to come up with such a lasting story. Painful and beautiful. thanks for sharing.
sabrinete
#7
it was short ? + i was expecting since you rated it lol , it's a good plot but i wish you wrote more in it with more details about gtop's relatiosnhip and topri relationship and how and why he did leave gd and why gd still believe that he will comeback to him one day , but the idea of the fiction is goood , thank you
mitadinasty #8
U'll update soon, right??? I'll wait ^^
Fighting!!!