First Impression:  3/10
It looks messy, with the lines everywhere, i know what you're
trying to get, but it's not working here. The other thing that catches my
eye is the colour red, it just looks overpowering in the poster.

Theme/Genre: 12/20
When posters come into my mind, i visualize something seductive
maybe some skin (lol xD). Well overall i find it quite easy to tell that it is a 
poster. Yuri's expressions are well interpreted as seductive, great use
of pictures. As for the theme dark, there doesn't seem to be much, for me,
the poster falls inthe fantasy/supernatural section, due to the clouds and
lightning stocks above.

Character Placement: 4/10
The Yuri on the top, she looks quite awkward there, i would have prefered
if the it was moved to the right a bit, whereas the Yuri on the bottom
would be moved to the left. You should make one Yuri the focal point,
you should reduced the size of either one, I would prefer to reduce the
size of the Yuri on the bottom, to make the one on top stand out more.

Typography:  6/10
I assumed you used the same font for the title, it would of been better if you 
changed the font of the word 'the' into something simplistic, therefore 
the other two words would be more noticable. I find the font