▶fairykyu

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First Impression:  7/10
It looks elegant! Love the white flower(?), which has been incoporated into a dress
for that girl. The things that irk me is canvas size,font used for the title and it's postioning.

Theme/Genre: 12/20
Your poster doesn't sit in the supernatural genre, it's more to the fantasy side.  Supernatural
falls into stuff like ghosts, spirits, angel, paranormal whereas fantasy falss into stuff like
wizards/witches, fairies, magic etc. 

Character Placement: 10/10
Not problem with it, it's pretty and simplistic

Typography:  6/10
I just find the font quite thinm it looks too delicate, to would have used either
Fathergraphy or Coneria. As I notedin the beginning I would change the canvas size,
I would prefer a landscape and reposition the title some where else, so it doesn't
look cramped in the middle.

Technique: 17/20
I can't seem to find any flaws in the blending, you just have to change the canvas from
portrait to landscape, since it looks overcrowded.

Colouring: 15/15
I perfectly suits what you were going for, just remember it's fantasy not supernatural. :)

Originality: 10/10
Yet again, soehting I haven't seen before!

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de-lux
#1
love them <3 :D
fairykyu
#2
Chapter 14: Ahh thanks for told me the diff between fantasy and supernatural.. Ah again... I always got a ptoblem on typhography.. Thanks for explained how to do better... Sure you such encourage me to do harder and find the best font and the position... Thanks and sorry if i was burdened you
SadisticSinner #3
Chapter 13: I dont know if I should comment on both of the reviews separately...but I'll just do it here XD
I had people choose between these two posters and most of all choose the first one,the manipulation one and i was like wtf XD because the other looked so much better in my opinion
and these reviews just proved it :3
I'll try to not make their faces pale from now on XD I'll keep that in mind forever lol
I'm pride of myself because you gave me 8/9 points for the typography something that I always at XD so huray for me~
/thumbs up
MochiMiro
#4
Oh, I forgot to comment. ono
I saw the review! and thank you once again. :)
clasicoustic- #5
Chapter 11: thank you for the review! ^^
fairykyu
#6
Chapter 11: I want to request for the 2nd time.. may i? i will wait whenever it will be... please take your time senpai, and sorry if burdened you.. thank you

001 Username: fairykyu

002 Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/peJ64yB.jpg
003 Theme/Genre: supernatural

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): almost 4 months

005 Story Link (If Any): -

006 Anything Else?: Thank youuu, take your time senpai

007 Password: Haroro
CoLatte
#7
001 Username: CoLatte

002 Graphic Link: http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/colatte5/gomgc_2_zpsab180b6c.jpg

003 Theme/Genre: Horror/Mystery

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): 2 weeks maybe?

005 Story Link (If Any): None

006 Anything Else?: Thank you. :D

007 Password: Haroro

Second one :-

001 Username: CoLatte

002 Graphic Link: http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/colatte5/nostalgicgc_2_zpsb10232ee.jpg

003 Theme/Genre: Tragedy/Angst

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): 2 weeks maybe?

005 Story Link (If Any): None

006 Anything Else?: Both of them were once a contest entry ehich already end. So, I wanted to ask for your review. Thanks!

007 Password: Haroro
fairykyu
#8
Chapter 10: OMG.. you're se details thank you very much for the review... its really such encourage me to do harder in the next.. i'll try to improve my techniques and the typography.. thanks for the time senpai for reviewed my graphic <333 and sorry if i burdened you
YOOMESBOND
#9
001 Username: minideer

002 Graphic Link: http://i.minus.com/iZclbM9eA33gR.gif

003 Theme/Genre: Romcom

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): 3-4 months

005 Story Link (If Any): http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/644911/

006 Anything Else?:

007 Password: Haroro
triplepixie
#10
Chapter 9: hello. thanks for taking your time to review my graphics^^~ i will improve my techniques, as you've said. it's kinda the hardest thing to me to have the picture cut well. oh and about the coloring, yes i know it was T A T i will really improve this. thankyou so much. will request for another graphic review again later^^~