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First Impression:  7/10
It looks amazing! I have never saw anything like ths before!  What I am
not liking is the quote font and the girl's arm.

Theme/Genre: 19/20
THe colours you've incoporated in the poster, really gives off a dark angst feel to ir.
Obvioculy with the girl, the mirror and the face (ghost thing) shows the theme
of supernatural.  What is keeping you from ful marks, is that, I fing the angst in the
poster is quite heavier than it should be.

Character Placement: 10/10
Honestly I really have no problem with this section, it looks fantastic!

Typography:  3/10
I honestly do not like any of the fonts you've used, especially the with the quote,
It's too thick for the poster, I would usually see this font in a romcom poster, and this is 
the total opposite. As for the title, I am liking the colour, it's nice, but I'm not liking how
it's overlaping the mirror.  Looking it from a distance (where i am sitting) the font looks
odd, I just doesn't seem to fit in the poster and theme. Browse your fonts, see what looks
better.

Technique: 10/20
Let's start with your faults, the girl's arm is one of the things that caught my eye
in the very beginning, it's so bright, compared to your other elements on the poster,

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de-lux #1
love them <3 :D
fairykyu #2
Chapter 14: Ahh thanks for told me the diff between fantasy and supernatural.. Ah again... I always got a ptoblem on typhography.. Thanks for explained how to do better... Sure you such encourage me to do harder and find the best font and the position... Thanks and sorry if i was burdened you
SadisticSinner #3
Chapter 13: I dont know if I should comment on both of the reviews separately...but I'll just do it here XD
I had people choose between these two posters and most of all choose the first one,the manipulation one and i was like wtf XD because the other looked so much better in my opinion
and these reviews just proved it :3
I'll try to not make their faces pale from now on XD I'll keep that in mind forever lol
I'm pride of myself because you gave me 8/9 points for the typography something that I always at XD so huray for me~
/thumbs up
MochiMiro #4
Oh, I forgot to comment. ono
I saw the review! and thank you once again. :)
clasicoustic- #5
Chapter 11: thank you for the review! ^^
fairykyu #6
Chapter 11: I want to request for the 2nd time.. may i? i will wait whenever it will be... please take your time senpai, and sorry if burdened you.. thank you

001 Username: fairykyu

002 Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/peJ64yB.jpg
003 Theme/Genre: supernatural

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): almost 4 months

005 Story Link (If Any): -

006 Anything Else?: Thank youuu, take your time senpai

007 Password: Haroro
CoLatte #7
001 Username: CoLatte

002 Graphic Link: http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/colatte5/gomgc_2_zpsab180b6c.jpg

003 Theme/Genre: Horror/Mystery

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): 2 weeks maybe?

005 Story Link (If Any): None

006 Anything Else?: Thank you. :D

007 Password: Haroro

Second one :-

001 Username: CoLatte

002 Graphic Link: http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/colatte5/nostalgicgc_2_zpsb10232ee.jpg

003 Theme/Genre: Tragedy/Angst

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): 2 weeks maybe?

005 Story Link (If Any): None

006 Anything Else?: Both of them were once a contest entry ehich already end. So, I wanted to ask for your review. Thanks!

007 Password: Haroro
fairykyu #8
Chapter 10: OMG.. you're se details thank you very much for the review... its really such encourage me to do harder in the next.. i'll try to improve my techniques and the typography.. thanks for the time senpai for reviewed my graphic <333 and sorry if i burdened you
YOOMESBOND #9
001 Username: minideer

002 Graphic Link: http://i.minus.com/iZclbM9eA33gR.gif

003 Theme/Genre: Romcom

004 Experience (How long have you been creating graphics?): 3-4 months

005 Story Link (If Any): http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/644911/

006 Anything Else?:

007 Password: Haroro
triplepixie #10
Chapter 9: hello. thanks for taking your time to review my graphics^^~ i will improve my techniques, as you've said. it's kinda the hardest thing to me to have the picture cut well. oh and about the coloring, yes i know it was T A T i will really improve this. thankyou so much. will request for another graphic review again later^^~
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