Of Coincidence Encounter, Growing Affections, & Happy Ending!

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Title: Of Coincidence Encounter, Growing Affections, and Happy Ending

Author: spreaddalove

Beta’d by: Me! (I hope there is no major mistake, please tell me if there is ^^)

Genre: AU, Romance, Fluff,

Rating: PG-13

Warning: None! (Just your usual love story ^^)

Summary: Sometimes, it only takes a pump on a shoulder for you to notice someone. However, in Jin’s case, it’s not just a pump; it is a fluff ball monster that makes him fall on his feet and rolls down the road to meet his other half. 

A/N:

  1. This story was originally being posted by eos_megami on her LJ; however, she left LJ and had asked me if I want to help her continue with this fic. Of course, I said yes!
  2. I’ve made some changes in the story to make it fit for a three-shot, instead of a shorty chaptered fic ^^ Since I start where she left off, therefore, to some of you had read this fic in the past, you will feel a bit of déjà vu (sorry *wink wink*)
  3. I have started on the second part of this fic, so the waiting won’t be long. I promise you that ^^
  4. REQUESTING: I’m looking for someone to help me creates a banner for this fic. Anyone interests? My payment is a fic in exchange for a banner (that’s the best I can do within my ability)
  5.  Happy reading~ COMMENT = ❤! So Comment Away! *giggling*
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Amalya #1
Chapter 3: Hmm. Not sure what to feel right now. A bit cheated by the deception, though the premise is cute and certainly makes for plenty of drama. I was happy about the ending and how everything did eventually end up, but considering Kame and the bride's relationship, it just feels odd that he would never once call her what she actually is. Which would have ruined the surprise, I know, and the reality does totally change how one looks at the rest of the events in the story, much like how Kame did in this final chapter here, but yeah.

Beyond that, it was a very cute story of discovering romance and two people who are suited for each other finding themselves in the right place at the right time. haha How everyone else was playing matchmaker was cute too. XD But their relationship felt natural and not forced, which was quite nice. I laughed at their bathroom mishap and then grinned at the cuddles that followed. ^_^ It was nice to see that they weren't all over each other, but it was still fluffy and cute at the same time.

Now, I'm not terribly familiar with Japanese yet so I do think that having some sort of explanation of the terms you used throughout would have been nice. And you did have a little trouble with some tense changes or misspellings here and there. Mostly it read pretty well but those things did make it a little tricky at some parts. Otherwise, good job for pulling it all together and thank you for sharing! They were ridiculously cute together. <3
renukizawa #2
just reading the description.. xDD
I can make you banners if you want ^_^

~Ren
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