Story Title:

The title packs a good amount of mystery that can attract curious readers. Like the ‘freak’ part of the title because it describes the vast characters found in the story. ^^

Graphics:

Kudos to the number of graphics in every book. It’s cute. For the main poster though, I think it would look better if the title was written in a circus-befitting font and the characters’ pictures - Jonghyun and Minho - were more prominent and facing towards opposite directions. The others look good as they are. I also suggest adding a silhouette-like background of the circus and the Iceheart mansion to make it look more mysterious and story-themed.

Description/Foreword:

The idea of the description is great, but the way it is written can be further improved to make it appeal to the readers more. I’d write it this way: “A past that has led two different worlds to war find themselves falling in place with one another. Living in different worlds and different lives, they face difficulties that harm one another.. Will these two seemingly different worlds collide together? Or will familial bonds perish in the name of selfishness?” I’m not saying that you have to write it as I’ve written. It’s just an example. You can play with words to make it sound more interesting and catchy.

Characterization:

Kudos to the awesome cast. Love the idea of how you merged these different people together into one story. I like the diverse characters in the story and the relationship they share with each other. I want to see some emotion more, though, especially with the Iceheart brothers since they have very conflicting characteristics and relationships. I like their cute sides though.

Plot:

I really, really like the plot of this story. It sounds really good and something that can be fun to read. I like the broken rel