2hyun5ever
☼ Perfect Dae Request Shop ☼ [Closed] [revamping]PICK-UP STORY LINK REVIEWER:deedee_zelo90 AUTHOR: 2hyun5ever layout credits
Story Title:
‘Shatter Me’ is a common name for a fic, I searched it on a google and there's been a list of a stories where appeared Shatter Me. But in a strange way it’s relevant to your story and the plot, it completely fits with storyline. But next time pick an original name that isn’t very over-used and less cliche.
Graphics:
Your poster screams for angst, but background not that much, I wish if background was made the same way like poster, that’s how I would do but in a way I liked it. The poster was really scary: One left there\s Taemin and on right there’s Kyungsoo while in the middle is Jongin. The effects are well used, the pictures are nice placed and imprinted on the poster.
Description/Foreword:
I loved so much your description that I had reading it dozen times, because It was so perfect and beautifully written. I haven’t detect any grammar error, or spelling or things like that. I even loved that you use quote from the movie. And also the description didn’t give away too much information on story. I don’t have nothing to say foreword as well, its very well organized.
Characterization:
I was surprised that you put Kai as original character, I kind of seen Taemin in better role. But when I read more and more the one shot, Kai fits very well. I also imagined a scenes of the argue
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