Chapter 1: Hahaha :)) it was really cute at first and then-.....

Nice story!

I'm sorry I susbscribed a long time ago and I'm leaving a comment just now! It's a nice fanfic but I was sooooooo much surprised by the end!! wow! the shock! lol! I said surprised not disappointed!

@TOPBOMshipper Thankssss <3 and Sorry but my next will be longer! I promise!!!<br />
@Feiji_aikawa Thank you!!!! :D

whoa..!! <br />
i like your story~~

This is a good fic!!! I hope it was longer :(This is a good fic!!! I hope it was longer :(

@ALL: T__T I'm a bad writer but I will try to be better!! FOR YOU GUYS! <3 Cause I love you guys :D

Kyaaaa! I love it! You got us nailed down! And the mirror part :'D I loved it! Sparrow and Hawk alert! ^^. <3 make another soon~ <3

This is good story, you need to write more long, I think. ^^ <br />
And I'd glad to read, if you give me more emotion. ^-^<br />
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btw, Good luck~

:(((( y u kill them both?