CRY

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I still remember the first time i saw him...it was late afternoon..and after that he stayed in my heart forever..

this is my first time to write a story hope you like it..its a song inspired and its about the milky couple..im sorry about the wrong grammar..

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JenniLee #1 Mar 16, 2015 08:44:55

This. Is. So. Good.

Sujieun_ #2 May 31, 2014 22:51:24

Chapter 12: Woooww. This is a very wonderful story. Hope you will make another wonderful story. Good job

chahinez #3 May 31, 2014 13:52:02

Chapter 12: wooow i really like it make another woou story plz <3

sw8vea #4 May 31, 2014 11:11:25

Chapter 12: THANK YOU FOR READING MY STORY..HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT AND IM REALLY SORRY FOR THE WRONG GRAMMAR
FOR ALL THE COMMENTS KAMSAMIDA!!!!:)

babyram5 #5 May 28, 2014 23:24:59

Chapter 11: I wiah they will have a happy ending

chahinez #6 May 28, 2014 02:55:35

Chapter 11: what :( ohh my god i really like it good job

shasyame #7 May 21, 2014 00:39:39

Chapter 8: Awww.. So cutee.. ^.^ I like it so much.. Need more longer update.. :) but still.. Nice story.. :)

chahinez #8 May 20, 2014 16:44:47

Chapter 8: i like it good job

shasyame #9 May 6, 2014 11:00:54

Chapter 1: Nice story.. :) hope u can update more.. :) .. Fighting !! ^.^