★ I Hear Your Voice
❄ seoulitudes reviews ;; finishing requests
TITLE: I Hear Your Voice
AUTHOR: B2UTYSONELOVER
REVIEWED BY: MakeMyLifeColourful
AUTHOR: B2UTYSONELOVER
REVIEWED BY: MakeMyLifeColourful
Title: (4/5)
The only reason I gave you a four was because the title is the same as the drama. However this title intrigued me, mainly because I am addicted to that drama and mainly because it sounded mysterious. I really like how you incorporated the title into the story and did not forget why you called your fanfic that in the first place.
Description + Foreword: (5/5)
To be honest I found absolutely nothing wrong with either. The description was well written as as well as the foreword which was somewhat of a cliff hanger for me, making me click the 'next' button pretty fast.
Plot + Originality:: (18/20)
For me the plot line is awesome, as I enjoy how you basically took one idea from the drama with the same name and made it into your own plot. Though it is not completely original, considering that the "I got into an accident and got powers" is overused, I like the plot.
Flow: (10/10)
I had no problems with the flow whatsoever, all the chapters seemed to connect with each other and the flow was smooth.
Characters: (10/10)
I enjoyed your characters immensely, especially Luhan's and Krystal's characters. They were well described, not by just saying it but by their words and actions. The use of the world 'cackle' to describe how Krystal laughed was ingenuous, and it left me thinking of her as some sort of creepy witch. All the characters were easy to relate with in some shape or form.
Writing Style: (10/10)
You have that long and descriptive writing style I crave for. I am quite picky about writing styles, but yours was like eating a fresh mint ice cream cone. It was beautiful to read and I enjoyed reading the chapters immensely.
Grammar + Spelling: (15/15)
The only reason this is so short is because I have nothing to complain about, I could not find one spelling mistake, which is a refreshing sight for my mistake ridden eyes.
Enjoyment: (5/5)
I absolutely loved it, and I am going to stay subscribed. It is actually the first boyxgirl fanfic I have liked and subscribed to, which is a great achievement for you in my eyes, since most of the girls in fanfics I have read are usually annoying and whiny.
(82/85) = 96.47% (featured!)
seoulitudes
thanks for requesting!!
thanks for requesting!!
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