Chapter 1: I love this. It's short and simple but the emotions hit me right in the heart.
I love the way you wrote Kibum especially, and how he knows he's not okay and won't be okay without Jinki. I also love how Jinki is willing to try even if it isn't what he really knows how to do.

I love desperate love and love that tries to find a way despite difficulties so this is perfect for me. Thanks for writing it! :)

Chapter 1: wow.....just wow
i rarely read dialogue-less angst but i don't know i feel sad for kibum and i play the right song while read this T____T what did jinki do to him anywy? but i appreciate that at least he try for kibum ;(
you did a very great work author-nim~ b

Chapter 1: Oh..... WOW!
It's really beautiful writing. I like it. Thou angst it's not really my genre, for this one... I don't know, it was hurt my heart at first, thinking about Kibum wants to runaway from Jinki. Then, in the end, you make it into happy ending. The mood arounds me suddenly become so warm. LOL I don't know what I'm talking about now. Forget it XD
But, I found typo here. Instead you write "Kibum", you wrote "Jibum". Hahaha I was confused at first like, did you purposely make it Jinki and Kibum's name became one? But then, I think it's only typo right?
But, it's cute name if we make another ship name for OnKey right? Hahahaha
Anyway, enough. Thanks for writing, I'm gonna waiting for your another story ^^