Chapter 1: Damn you’re crazy author! The thing is, im into this kind of crazy stuff. What a brilliant mind of yours

Chapter 1: WOW love js surely blind

Chapter 1: WHHAAT

Chapter 1: This certainly left an impression... which is always a good thing.

Chapter 1: I feel more like a beta-reader than a reviewer... It is hard to criticize ^^”
*Stiff.
*I’m not entirely sure this is the correct reason (as I’m not a fan of learning about grammar), but ‘can’ in past form is ‘could’ as ‘will’ to ‘would’.
*No to Duguen. Duguen. Duguen. Just no. It’s not universal anyway.
*May be.
*There are mixed use of tenses, all ‘is’ should be ‘was’ unless it’s in conversation.
*’And’ and ‘but’ are conjugation so you should use them to combine sentences instead of starting one with it.
*If followed or preceded by verb like say, mutter, whisper, reply, etc, use comma, unless it ends with question or exclamation mark. Ex: “I understand,” TaeYeon weakly replied. Or she turned around and said, “How are you doing?”
*The spaces between paragraph/lines are oddly not constant and I’m not talking about the non-italic and italic parts.
*Kekeke? NO.
Overall, it’s good. You should troll harder, though. Adding creepy stuff will increase the impact of the twist. No need to be explicit, just a mention is fine but it should make reader somewhat believe TaeYeon is alive while they are reading and then give them chill when they reach the end. Tiny vague details always do the trick. Always go for dramatic last sentence in this kind of story. For me, the end felt rather confusing because of the “their friends’ remains and wed them till death do they never part.” What is that supposed to mean? Isn’t Fany, as Yuri mentioned beforehand, at the hospital?

Chapter 1: I was feeling all sorts of fluff and cheese reading the starting and the flashbacks. But then the twist ending just left me speechless. Wow. I mean, it takes a lot to have me feeling all sorts of things in just a matter of minutes but you seemed to be able to do that with great ease. This is both beautiful and heart-breaking but comforting at the same time. At least, the ending comforted me. But great job on this shot ^^

Chapter 1: There's so many things going on within this short story. You success to put them all with good flow.
The fact that probably Tiffany was being burried alive just to be with Taeyeon is hauntingly beautiful

Chapter 1: I came to read this from fujinolover's comment trade or something page... I've read your stories before and had been captured by the depth of the words you use. Bravo to that.

Regarding the story... i dont know how to put it to words. In present time of course it is just over a very short period of time then the flashbacks done nicely chronologically. The discrete yet descriptive situation or surrounding really gives me the visual. I'm a very cinematic imaginative person so it's like watching a movie to me. Love it. Plus I'm a huge er for surprises. The end where tiffany lies with taeyeon to be buried and die together really change my opinion on the entire plain n simple story i thought it was. Never cross my mind at all that she is in the coffin at the beginning. I guess n guess but couldn't until the end. Well played.

I'd give a full 10 out of 10 for this one shot. Approved!

Chapter 1: Mayn, i was all pumped up to read the 'happily-ever-after' ending.
That was a let down. Totally threw me off xD

I guess they still got their happily ever after ending...but, like, creepier :DDD