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When the bombs dropped, all I could think of was trying to find a way home.

Foreword

He stiffens for a moment, then his song falters and his voice breaks into sobs, the dry, lonely cries of a man who will never see his home again. It makes me wonder once again why he decided to come with me, but I don’t question him, only offer what small comfort I can.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Written as a birthday present for TaeGyu_DekaChin

Lovely poster and background by Ching A Ling Graphic Shop

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 3: Not your typical story here for sure but definitely well pieced together. The characters are believable to say the least, and I like how you incorporated the worries of Marissa and Derek. You've done a good job of presenting two distinct stories: Luke's with the addition of Sunggyu and Marissa and Derek's. Totally cracked up with how Luke very nearly dismissed him out of hand too. Yay Derek! I can't say that was cliche in the least. haha A bit later on, the scene with the babysitter stretches plausibility, but it's still endearing and enough to make one believe for the most part. haha Though you may want to decide on whether she has a rifle or a shotgun. ;)

As soon as you mentioned sickness, my thoughts immediately jumped to Resident Evil. lol I'm rather glad it didn't go that route but you certainly made me wonder how things were going to play out. It was enjoyable seeing the way Luke and Sunggyu's relationship sort of developed. And that ending was damnably bittersweet. -_- All I can say is that Sunggyu got awesome in a really short period of time, though it does prove to be a dedicated gesture just the same.

This was a very pleasant read from the norm. It definitely felt very isolated, which makes sense considering the potential loss of life overall, though I might have appreciated the mention of a little more of the stuff that happened while they were traveling. Even if it was simply just an absence of people. *shrug* That's just me though. heh Great job overall. I did enjoy reading it so yay! Just making my way through bits here and there where I can. ;)
Frosty_Maiden
#2
Chapter 3: Beautiful. I really have so little to say other then the fact this is perfect. <3
So utterly sad but it felt so real. Such a great job at connecting with the readers on an emotional level.
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#3
Chapter 3: okay wow i'm crying. i was worried that you were going to kill my baby gyu, but i'm so glad you had me die instead...which sounds so masochistic i know, but i couldn't handle a gyu or a family death. the gratitude i have for my very own story, and one i wholeheartedly love is immense. thank you so much <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 2: Aww I know the world is ending here, and there's bandits and thieves, but the few instances of love and good make me so warm and fuzzy inside *cries*
And Gyu, what can I say? He's perfect <3
Frosty_Maiden
#5
Chapter 2: This is so WOW...I mean it and totally not in a bias way.
It really feels like a post-apocalyptic world, yet the moments of joy and pleasure are so pure and perfect it makes it feel so much more intimate...
I love your writing in this, I think this is another one of your greats in my personal opinion.
You are a true chameleon in a writing sense. Always changing and making a story fit the style.
Your amazing, this is amazing. Such a great choice <3
Frosty_Maiden
#6
Chapter 1: I love the way your telling this story. I love your wording of it and everything. Its very professional. Like um the guy who wrote 'the road' something Mc-something....argh can't remember. That book was depressing as hell but I really felt like I was there. Just like in this.
It feels different to your other stories somehow.
I wonder what will happen as it unfolds...lmao...yeah I bet Hamsta would regret not taking Korean in this instance lol.

Great poster too...the British actor is great...surprised you used him....I don't know what you would have seen him in?
I watched him in Skins and the borgias.
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#7
Chapter 1: Okay, I can't explain how worried I am that I now chose death ._.
But it's a great start, and Gyu...ugh of course I'll be regretting taking Japanese over Korean LMAO
StarlightSpirit
#8
Oh wow that poster is just perfect~! <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#9
Okay wow I can tell I'm just going to sob forever. LOVE YOU <3