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The broken road stretches out in front of us, the wind blowing harsh and dry across the once green lands of northern Washington. A worn scarf is wrapped around my face, offering protection from the sand that stings my skin and the sun that threatens to burn. It’s been almost two months since the bombs dropped; two months since America became nothing more than a shell of what it once was. The sun still has that red glare to it, casting the world into a constant glow that makes my eyes ache. Luckily there was no radiation in the residue, or we would all have been dead long ago.

Luck. I call it luck that I am alive, thousands of miles from my home and only praying that my family has survived this. I was lucky, honestly, that I happened to be driving back from a weekend in Las Vegas when the bombs dropped; one struck Los Angeles and obliterated the city. Had I been at the university then I would be among the thousands who died.

Every major city in the nation was struck, every military base, everywhere that could be a possible threat. Wiped out, gone, destroyed, whatever you want to call it. I had stood on the highway and watched the plume of destruction rise from the city, and my only thought at the time had been that I hoped my family was safe.

See, I’m from a small town in Alaska, and if they truly only wanted to break America’s systems, then they would have left them alone. But the worrier in me needs confirmation that they survived, confirmation that they were okay. 

With the collapse of all structured development, there was no one to fix the phone lines, no way to fix the electricity; we were doomed into a land of no technology. I had driven my car as far north as I could, stopping at abandoned gas stations and filling it with whatever gas I could get from the pumps, stuffing my car with food and drinks. I made it quite a ways, all the way out of California and into the lower parts of Oregon, but then my car quit on me. I’m not sure what happened, I’m no mechanic, but it puttered to a stop despite that the gas tank was showing more than half a tank. So I filled my backpack and duffel bag with food and drinks, grabbed a blanket for warmth, and set off hiking. 

It was within a few days that I met up with the first two of my companions… they were people who had been traveling as well, stuck far from home and desperate to get there. The man and woman, husband and wife, they’re from Canada, a little to the East of the coast but we all figured it’s safer to travel in numbers. They were the first two I’d met up with, and since I had already heard the screams and violence in the towns I passed through, I was wary of them at first. They begged to travel with me, begged for food because they saw my bags, and finally I gave in. It was her eyes that did it, her eyes when she spoke of her children at home in Canada. I had automatically thought of my little brothers and couldn’t deny them the chance to get home to see if their children were alive.

To my shock, they made great companions. The woman, Marissa, was funny and chatty and she tried her best to make the mood light and steer both her mind and mine away from our worries. Her husband wasn’t as easy, Derek was the quiet, brooding type. But he happily carried a bag and did whatever was asked of him, and after the first few days, he began to open up more and became a nice companion as well. I could see in the lines of his face that this had aged him mentally; he was supposed to be the protector of his family, yet here he was stuck hundreds of miles from them, unknowing as to if the sitter they’d had watching their two little ones for their getaway weekend had cared to watch over them. I could hardly imagine the pain that they were in, and so my heart went out to them. 

My third companion… he is a new addition. We found him in Seattle, running from a bunch of guys with a can of food tucked under his arm. I had felt terrible not helping him, but didn’t want to risk not seeing my family again and stayed back as he passed. Derek, though, must have seen something in the other’s face, because he grabbed his walk

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 3: Not your typical story here for sure but definitely well pieced together. The characters are believable to say the least, and I like how you incorporated the worries of Marissa and Derek. You've done a good job of presenting two distinct stories: Luke's with the addition of Sunggyu and Marissa and Derek's. Totally cracked up with how Luke very nearly dismissed him out of hand too. Yay Derek! I can't say that was cliche in the least. haha A bit later on, the scene with the babysitter stretches plausibility, but it's still endearing and enough to make one believe for the most part. haha Though you may want to decide on whether she has a rifle or a shotgun. ;)

As soon as you mentioned sickness, my thoughts immediately jumped to Resident Evil. lol I'm rather glad it didn't go that route but you certainly made me wonder how things were going to play out. It was enjoyable seeing the way Luke and Sunggyu's relationship sort of developed. And that ending was damnably bittersweet. -_- All I can say is that Sunggyu got awesome in a really short period of time, though it does prove to be a dedicated gesture just the same.

This was a very pleasant read from the norm. It definitely felt very isolated, which makes sense considering the potential loss of life overall, though I might have appreciated the mention of a little more of the stuff that happened while they were traveling. Even if it was simply just an absence of people. *shrug* That's just me though. heh Great job overall. I did enjoy reading it so yay! Just making my way through bits here and there where I can. ;)
Frosty_Maiden
#2
Chapter 3: Beautiful. I really have so little to say other then the fact this is perfect. <3
So utterly sad but it felt so real. Such a great job at connecting with the readers on an emotional level.
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#3
Chapter 3: okay wow i'm crying. i was worried that you were going to kill my baby gyu, but i'm so glad you had me die instead...which sounds so masochistic i know, but i couldn't handle a gyu or a family death. the gratitude i have for my very own story, and one i wholeheartedly love is immense. thank you so much <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#4
Chapter 2: Aww I know the world is ending here, and there's bandits and thieves, but the few instances of love and good make me so warm and fuzzy inside *cries*
And Gyu, what can I say? He's perfect <3
Frosty_Maiden
#5
Chapter 2: This is so WOW...I mean it and totally not in a bias way.
It really feels like a post-apocalyptic world, yet the moments of joy and pleasure are so pure and perfect it makes it feel so much more intimate...
I love your writing in this, I think this is another one of your greats in my personal opinion.
You are a true chameleon in a writing sense. Always changing and making a story fit the style.
Your amazing, this is amazing. Such a great choice <3
Frosty_Maiden
#6
Chapter 1: I love the way your telling this story. I love your wording of it and everything. Its very professional. Like um the guy who wrote 'the road' something Mc-something....argh can't remember. That book was depressing as hell but I really felt like I was there. Just like in this.
It feels different to your other stories somehow.
I wonder what will happen as it unfolds...lmao...yeah I bet Hamsta would regret not taking Korean in this instance lol.

Great poster too...the British actor is great...surprised you used him....I don't know what you would have seen him in?
I watched him in Skins and the borgias.
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#7
Chapter 1: Okay, I can't explain how worried I am that I now chose death ._.
But it's a great start, and Gyu...ugh of course I'll be regretting taking Japanese over Korean LMAO
StarlightSpirit
#8
Oh wow that poster is just perfect~! <3
ShimizuTheShizzShota
#9
Okay wow I can tell I'm just going to sob forever. LOVE YOU <3