Chapter 3 - The F.T. Bond

F.T. Island Dorm Life

-Jonghun's POV-

I looked at the way the other members all treat Minari. Espacially Jaejin when he mentioned Wonbin. It was quite touching to see them bond so fast. I was really really glad. I looked over at Hongki and gave him an assuring smile. He shot one back at me.

 

-Hongki's POV-

I knew what Jonghun meant when he shot me that smile. He wants me to know that we can accept Minhwan and that we all should really protect him till he's strong enough again. He is like an injured bird, now healing it's way back.

Thinking about it, Even though Minari is welcomed, he still can't know our secret. Even Seunghyun and Jaejin doesn't know it. Only Wonbin knew about it. I began thinking about it and I guess Jonghun must have saw me cause I heard him tell the rest that he needed to talk with me privately and he dragged me away.

 

-Seunghyun's POV-

I watch as Jonghun hyung pulled Hongki hyung to his room. Something's going on but I still can't figure it out. Why are they always together? Are they in a relationship or something? Hmmm , i am going to find out. wahahahaha. >:D No hard feelings to them or anything but i'm just reall curious..~~

 

-Minhwan's POV-

I played and fooled around with Jaejin hyung and Seunghyun hyung a while more. Suddenly, Seunghyun sshi said, " Yah, Minari. Shall we go out and eat dinner or do you want Hongki hyung to cook?"

"I'm ok with anything. :D"

"Ok then. We'll wait till they finish talking and we'll get Hongki hyung to cook yeah?"

"Ok~!! "

Seunghyun sshi smiled at me and ruffled my hair.

"Yah, you're so cute you know? kekeke."

I blushed and smiled back shyly. Jaejin hyung chuckeled.

"Yup, you sure are a cute one Minari. kekekekekekeke~"

I blushed at both of their comments. They are really nice people. I hope that I will be happy with them.. keke., and i hope that i'll always be with them.. Espacially Seunghyun sshi....~

 

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Lalalala~ lol. short chappie cause i'm having exams~ >.< thanks for reading~~ ;DD

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choijonghyunsaranghe #1
Chapter 16: I cried T_T
DKimLittleGoddess
#2
Uhhh... I don't get it. -.-; You're what seems to be 'plot' and the whole story is completely different. There's a lot to point out but I'm gonna comment what I remembered.

You're writing style is kinda... off. There was a lot of unnecessary smileys everywhere and too much use of 'kekekeke'. If your characters are happy, you can always express it in other ways like, 'He chuckled, "Blah Blah Blah." Then smiled.' instead of using that laugh too often.

And the story was too fast paced. The days were continuous and a lot happened like they did this and that and immediately saw Wonbin, etc. Wonbin's last five minutes was wayyy too fast. You didn't even wrote what happened during the analysis and just injected him with a 'killing medicine' whtver that's called. ~.~;

And as I've said, the plot and the whole story is different. It ended with Wonbin dying? I thought I'm reading about F.T Island's Dorm Life focused on SeungHwan. I was expecting that they do things like this and that with Minhwan but then it shifted and focused on Jaejin and Wonbin's story. -.-; And whatever happened to SeungHwan after they discovered they were childhood friends? -.-;

And how can Minhwan magically knew that Wonbin is sick? O.O; He inherited this from his mother... Okay. But he immediately knew it was stomach cancer? Whoa... *O* But this is a 'fic' anyways, so it's acceptable in a way.

Sorry if I sounded harsh. I'm not being mean or anything... ^^v You can improve, definitely! :)

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YourRemedy #3
Waeyo!? Why did you kill wonbin? Why? T-T<br />
anyways, I love it!<br />
paranoidfreaker
#4
Oh my~~ Wonbin you're sick?????<br />
TT^TT
paranoidfreaker
#5
new reader here!! wah~~ i think i love your story.. just update soon.. and i hope wonbin don't do anything that will hurt jaejin..<br />
^^
asdfghjBullySong #6
cliffhanger .. i hope wonbin will not do anything to our jaejin :))
SHINee2MinLove #7
@kihyunkit; haha! :D ne, thank you very very much!! :D
asdfghjBullySong #8
eheheh i love your pairings and the story :D so cool :D update soon :D
SHINee2MinLove #9
@kihyunkit; haha((: ne, i will update asap. :D gumawo for reading!!!^^<br />
@FT123456; hehe, thanks for reading too. ;}
FT123456 #10
Aww.. Jinnie gonna be sad ><