Fix This City

Description

The thing about Do Kyungsoo and Kim Jongin is that they are not something you can easily define and sketch with elegant words. They are two wandering souls in search of a salvation and perhaps they needn't look too far.


(author's note)

This is for Iffa who gave me the prompt though I think this didn't really go as you would've thought it would. But thank you for being the best beta in the whole wide galaxy (see what I did there? :p), for the encouragements and for not giving up on me and also for putting up with my crazy all the time. I'm glad I get to know you!

 

 

"look at the stars. look how the shine for you, and everything you do."

-coldplay

 

 

 

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siemprekaisoo
#1
Chapter 3: Just loved this!!! It was so beautifully written & I especially loved your descriptions and your use of metaphors...it really added to the visual imagery of the story. Thank you for writing & sharing this gem!!!
Nicole121314 #2
Chapter 3: Simply beautiful...
Nicole121314 #3
Chapter 2: I really love this... This is love
Nicole121314 #4
Chapter 1: This is beautifully narrated... love it
chensubs #5
Chapter 3: the plot is simple but u write it beautifully and ksoo character is good written and clear wow i like u man
ainundy #6
Chapter 3: This story is simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing this piece of yours, author-nim ^^
I thought that EXO's They Never Know go along with the storyline :3
geebee #7
Chapter 3: I am so glad that I stumbled into this story. I don't know what it is about kaisoo that I find a lot of kaisoo writers write angst so ing well. This story was so so beautiful. And I especially enjoyed the line about how everyone is in some way, broken. I personally favor more slice-of-life, angsty fics like this because you get a lot of good insight from the person who wrote the fic. Idk if I'm making any sense at all. And I really enjoyed how you wrote this fic. So yeah, thank you so much for this fic and I'm looking forward to more fics from you!
lanadel
#8
Your writing style it so unique . i really like your stories . I would absolutely love some heavy angst from you :* :* :*
tulips-n-roses
#9
Chapter 3: Perfect. Just... perfect.
I can't believe these three chapters of perfection got me teary, tingly, warm inside and happy. Thatnks for writing this.
Please write more KaiSoo. It's just beautiful
nindyasnast
#10
Chapter 3: Feel like crying out of this story's perfection..
This is so beautiful! Your writing is so beautiful! Please write more kaisoo fics.. I love your writing style, you're officially become one of my fav author now :)