Dual personality

Description

In which there is a boy, all alone in the world who has nothing to rely on, except his different personalities: Jinki and Onew. But what happens when he starts losing himself between the two? When he pushes himself so far that he doesn't know who he is or what he started off with?

 

What happens when he meets someone who is willing to remind him of everything?  The good...and the bad.

 

Foreword

Kayso IDK what caused me to write this, but the lines just kinda...popped into my head and I started writing from there. I should really be updating my other fic, but I'm a horrible person, and so I instead wrote this.

 

And this was SUPPOSED to be a oneshot, but it..kinda got out of hand :P

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rowgentlydownurdream
#1
(๑>ᆺ<๑) (๑>ෆ<๑) baeksoo forever!
Albinum #2
Chapter 3: The writing is very well done, unlike most fanfics who are riddled with errors. I like the psychological aspect and the ending is sweet, not too fast and direct and not cheesy.
jhengchie
#3
Chapter 3: Wahhhhhhh finally jinki trying to heal himself with jonghyun's help.. wahhh^^
Taoris95 #4
Chapter 1: Haha, stick to one name! Yes, I'm reading it again, don't judge
Taoris95 #5
Chapter 2: Ugh, I went back and reread everything and it got even better and now I want you to update even more! You're so good at writing, I can't wait to hear more!
This line just killed me:
"I can hear your heart beat louder when you hug me."
dubushi #6
Chapter 2: This is beautiful one word cant describe it but its the first thing that comes to me thx author san
jhengchie
#7
Chapter 2: awww... the connection the two had in here was just brilliant. I just like the willingness of Jinki to bare his soul to Jonghyun and Jonghyun accepting him for who he is. I just like this scene ^^
DOnewyah
#8
Chapter 2: Auw the last scene so sweet!
Tina08 #9
Chapter 2: nice update
Taoris95 #10
Chapter 2: Oh. My. God. I'm crying, they're so sweet! OMO, now I'm the one not being able to breathe. They're so perfectly broken together, I love them. Just, THE FEELS! Can't...breathe!
Saranghae unnie, you're the sweetest ever! Please write more, I need more!
Can't breathe!