{ ✞ } Delusional screams.

Description

Plot

Hyuna and Hyunseung have been together for almost five years and ever since they met each other in high school and fell in love almost instantly everyone around them have been saying how perfect they look together. To celebrate their true love the high school sweethearts have decided to get married and maybe even have some little chubby feet wander around the wooden floors of their just bought apartment. Unfortunately, Hyuna gets into an accident the day before their wedding, leaving Hyunseung behind to deal with the death of his soulmate and lost love all on his own.  

Characters

Kim Hyuna

Hyuna is a bubbly girl with a personality as big as the Earth. She's always all over the place and there's no way anyone could not see her, if one does not dare to speak to her she will eventually find a reason to go and bug that person. She's also a very emotional girl, every feeling she has shows right on her face and it's impossible for her to keep her thoughts and feelings locked away and safe from everyone else. Hyunseung usually describes her as his little hyper puppy because she just can't stay in one place and well, he finds her really adorable as well. 


Jang Hyunseung

One might say that Hyunseung is the opposite of Hyuna, he's calm and reasonable and likes to take things as slowly as he possibly can, just because it's easier to control things that go slowly. He's the kind of guy who actually thinks before he acts and not the other way around but that's what makes him and Hyuna such a great couple. Even though he might be somewhat shy and he likes to keep his feelings more to himself he's still one of the most romantic guys Hyuna has ever met and never fails to show just how much he loves her and cares for her. 


Lee Hyori

Hyori and Hyuna are childhood friends who refound each other when it turned out they both had decided to attend the same university. Since then the girls are almost inseparable, there isn't anything they can't trust to each other and Hyori is always there for Hyuna if she needs a shoulder to cry on or just someone to eat huge amounts of vanilla ice cream with. 

I'll add other characters as the story goes on, aight. Very many sorry k thank bye. 

Notes

First of all I'd like to credit whoever made these gifs because I actually have no idea, I just found them on tumblr and other random weird websites I like to visit. You did great job and I love y'all, aight. Oh, and if you want me to take the gif down then that's no problem either, just contact me and we can work it out. Got the poster from the awesome Tenshi graphics store and I love it so much. Make sure to check it out, aight? 

This story takes part in the amazing contest Give me a year that's run by the awesome wishful and takes place for the second time already, woo! I've actually never ever joined any writing contests but this one seems just too good to ignore so here I am now. Also I choose f(x)'s song Shadow as my prompt.

So that's it and I really hope you'll enjoy my story. Please feel free to write any comments below, I'd really love reading some criticism as well because I'm mainly here to improve my English and writing. 

Foreword

First gaze;

The weather was rather harsh that day, it was much colder than it had been the day before and the only thing Hyunseung managed to do in the terrible cold was crossing his arms on his chest and keep them as close to him as possible, pulling his hat further down before doing that, though. The first day of school didn't make him feel too excited either and all he wanted to do at that moment was to run back to his comfortable bed and curl into a small ball, to escape from the unusual weather and new people at school he was rather possibly going to hate. 

His heavy steps led him closer and closer to the building he wished he could be far away from and his sighs became louder and louder, obviously packed with frustration and anger. The road under his feet seemed to get more crowded by the second and that irritated the boy even more, he hated the fact that he had to attend a new school and that he had no friends or even acquaintances there. It felt like jumping into a deep hole without knowing if there would be a lake with clear and water under there or if he would fall onto a sea of sharp rocks and maybe even spikes just to find his end. 

Somehow Hyunseung managed to gather up all the willpower and self discipline he had and soon found himself wandering around in the seemingly endless hallways of the huge building. He was lost without knowing how to get out of the sad situation he was in at the moment, though he concentrated on finding anything resembling a board where he could maybe find his class plan but nothing like that caught his attention. The boy had just now realized he hadn't checked what classes he was supposed to have that day and the desire to hit himself right there right at that moment grew almost unbearable but fortunately help arrived shortly before his self discipline ran out when a girl with the brightest smile he had ever seen playing on her plump lips approached him and asked if he needed any help.

At that moment Hyunseung could've sworn an angel had escaped from heaven and he wished he could keep the divine creature to himself, he knew it'd be a rather selfish act but he couldn't have cared less. The boy's voice was stuck in his throat and his mission to look like a prince charming in the girl's eyes failed completely, honestly his dropped jaw and constantly moving lips which couldn't deliver a sound resembled more of a fish than a prince. And once again the male felt like slapping himself but for the sake of the relationship that didn't even exist yet he successfuly resisted the desire. 

Hyuna on the other hand was happily chuckling and letting the weight of her body flow from her toes to heels, rocking back and forth on her heels as she was waiting for an answer to slip from the boy's lips. She found him rather cute and even though she didn't think of Hyunseung as a potential boyfriend material she already labeled him as his new friend and if she decided on something she was going to make sure that it would go just as she wished it to. 

Though Hyunseung was still stunned by Hyuna's beauty he finally managed to spill some words,"Hey, are you religious?" Hyuna found the question quite weird and pursed her lips into a small pout while staring at the boy with her eyebrows furrowed, wondering what he could've possibly meant by that. After a few seconds she decided to give up and just muttered in response,"Why are you asking?" There was another short moment of silence between them before the boy spurted out,"Because you're the answer to all my prayers." And at that exact moment Hyuna was blown away by the words and even though he found the silly pick up line rather stupid it was still the cutest thing anyone had every said to her and so her lips curled into one of the biggest smiles she had ever worn as a quiet giggle fell from her cherry lips. Hyunseung's face lit up as soon as she saw the girl smile, his heart felt so much lighter but yet it felt as if it was planning to explode soon. As he was just about to open his mouth to ask the angel's name Hyuna hold out her hand with a small piece of paper on which she had just written her phone number and flashed another bright smile before leaning in and whispering,"Oh, and I have some free time on Saturday. Maybe around eight or so."

And then she ran off, leaving an behind amazed Hyunseung who still couldn't wipe the playful but yet foolish smile off his face. 

Comments

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Hyunajs #1
Chapter 4: Poor hyunseung..
Your story make me cry..
hathapuff #2
Chapter 3: oh my I think my heart is too weak for this. why is life so unfair and suffocating for both of them
starlight_elk
#3
Chapter 3: Ahh T^T it's so sad. Please reincarnate and encounter in the next life but don't die. It's my only wish knowing the dead doesn't come back.
vikitooo
#4
Chapter 3: I like it :D, really good ! :3
Eksoow
#5
Chapter 2: I'm really not into troublemaker stories, but this.. this is beautiful. :') please update whenever you can, I'm looking forward to it. ^^
starlight_elk
#6
Chapter 2: This breaks my heart T^T good job
starlight_elk
#7
Chapter 1: My gosh I think if it continues like this I'll end up crying rivers. Please update soon.
htetooyan95 #8
Chapter 1: this story is good,keep updating
starlight_elk
#9
It seems very promising. Keep it up ^^
HeoGaYoon01 #10
Sounds good I ship this couple.