By Yours Truly | Review Shop | Busy

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Welcome to By Yours Truly | Review Shop!

Would you like to have your stories reviewed without any points system?

Well, you've come to the right place!

 

Status: Open / Closed / Busy / Hiatus / Hiring 

Updates: 

22/2/2014: Shop Opened!

 

About Us:

Owner: Nunsong-I

Reviewer: Nunsong-I

I'm rather harsh whenever it comes to reviewing but don't worry, I know my limits ;) I'll be giving you​ constructive advices and tips on how you can improve your story. No, I won't bash your story; that's totally unprofessional. My reviews will be pretty long and detailed because I'll be elaborating my points. And yes, I will also point out your strenghts as well as the parts I liked about your story ;) 

 

Rules:

  • Subscribing is a must. Upvotes are highly appreciated :3 Requests won't be accepted unless you've subscribed
  • Please request in the comments section. Request only when shop is open :)
  • I accept any genres and any pairings ;)
  • Please do not rush me. I hate being rushed. Please understand that I have other things to do as well and yes, school is included in that list of things so I might take quite some time to complete your review :) 
  • Yes, you may request as many times as you'd like
  • Please remember to leave a comment once you've received your review
  • Do not bash me if you're unhappy with your review. Keep in mind that I have feelings too TnT
  • ​I have the right to refuse your story. But don't worry; I don't usually do that :)
  • Please credit me and this review shop in your foreword once you've received your review
  • Should you want a re-do on your review, simply let me know in the comments section; be polite
  • Password: xuehua

 

Rubrics:

Like I said, there will be no points system because I don't believe in that kind thing. I find it unnecessary :-/ But your reviews will be done according to these rubrics :)

First Impressions.

Title.

Description & Foreword.

Originality, Plot and Flow.

Style of Writing.

Language.

Vocabulary Usage.

Characterisation.

Overall.

 

Form:

Author:

Co-Author:

Story Title:

Story Link:

Genre:

Story Type (Oneshot, Chaptered, Collection of Oneshots etc.):

​Characters:

Summary:

Status (Ongoing/Complete):

Is English your first language:

Additional Notes:

Password:

 

 

 

Foreword

Looking forward to receiving your requests! ;)

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Angel110 #1
hello, just wanted to inform you that I put the story I requested a review for on draft mode~
silver-linings #2
Author: Jinheesnap92

Co-Author:

Story Title: Be The Light...

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/671850

Genre: Romance, Friendship, a bit sad, and school life

Story Type : Chaptered

​Characters: Lee Newon (OC), Zelo, and BAP

Summary: Park Newon used to be a bright and kind girl who everyone loves. After a horrible incident with her family, she's now the dark and quiet Lee Newon. Her friends, Lee Yumi and Kim Tia are always there for her so she'll never remember her past again. But, what happens when someone starts hurting those near her? What will be her choice?

Status (Ongoing/Complete): Complete

Is English your first language: No, but I consider it to be.

Additional Notes:

Password: xuehua
AyoBuddy #3
Author: AyoBuddy

Co-Author:

Story Title: Demon Prince Luhan

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/676440

Genre: Romance, fantasy

Story Type: Chaptered

​Characters: Luhan, Sehun, Kai and the rest of EXO (eventually)

Summary: Luhan's is stuck in a school for special people, special as in those who wield power. Luhan is strong, he's the demon prince after all. His mission: Destroy the human world.

Status (Ongoing/Complete): On-Going

Is English your first language: Nope, English is not my first language :)

Additional Notes: Not really, thanks in advance :D

Password: xuehua
ThatOneOtherWriter #4
Author: ThatOneOtherWriter

Co-Author: -none-

Story Title: My Brother's 'Brother'

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/190638/my-brother-s-brother-drama-korean-romance-seunghyun-siwon--yunho

Genre: romance; drama; slice-of-life

Story Type (Oneshot, Chaptered, Collection of Oneshots etc.): Chaptered

​Characters: Jung Yunho; Choi Seunghyun; Choi Siwon; Park Yoochun; Suh Ji Woo

Summary: Two men who know each other only by face, with only one common link, will learn to live together comfortably.

For six months.


Status (Ongoing/Complete): Ongoing

Is English your first language: Yes

Additional Notes: It hasn't been updated for a while but I'd like a fresh review on it so I can gauge the current potential interest level. Thanks in advanced!

Password: xuehua
LavenderAlisa19 #5
Author: LavenderAlisa19
Co-Author: -
Story Title: Deeply Rooted
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/415013
Genre: angst, slice of life
Story Type: chaptered shot (9 chapters in total)
​Characters: Teen Top's Ricky, 2 female OCs
Summary: It's a story about rebounds and moving on.
Status: as of now, one more chapter before it's completed :D hopefully it'll be done by the end of this week... or next week.
Is English your first language: No
Additional Notes: -
Password: xuehua

Thank you! Hope you'll accept this request :)
TheOldDays #6
Chapter 1: Author: JessRa
Co-Author (Beta): Mikahina
Story Title: The Storyteller
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/592889/the-storyteller-angst-bigbang-gri-jiyong-seungri-fluffy-nyongtory
Genre: Angst
Story Type: Chaptered
Characters: Seungri & Gdragon
Summary: A diary is a story, one written by your own hands, that remains plastered over the yellowish sheets for eternity, turning yourself into something eternal. This is the story about the greatness of my heart.
Status: Complete
English first language?: No
Additional Notes: -
Password: xuehua

Thanks!! ^.^ Good luck on your new Review Shop!
Mandm33 #7
Author: Mandm33
Co-Author: -
Story Title: Kill Me
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/672973/kill-me-angst--jackson-mark-got7-jark-markson
Genre: Angst
Story Type: Oneshot
Characters: Mark and Jackson (Got7)
Summary: Mark loved Jackson, but sometimes love isn't enough, and Mark can't take it anymore
Status: Complete
Is English your first language: Yup
Additional Notes:
Password: Xuehua
lovesome #8
Author: lovesome

Co-Author: -

Story Title: Cotton Candy

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/651736/cotton-candy-friendship-infinite-sliceoflife-sunggyu

Genre: friendship, slice of lice

Story Type (Oneshot, Chaptered, Collection of Oneshots etc.): chaptered

​Characters: Kim Sunggyu and OC

Summary: Kim Sunggyu was Park Sun's best friend during high school. But they turned out to be drifted apart because of one thing and other. After five years being away, they ran into each other and found out that both had changed.

Status (Ongoing/Complete): ongoing

Is English your first language: nope

Additional Notes:

Password: xuehua
Angel110 #9
Author: Angel110

Co-Author: yamitan7 (beta), In-Love-With-Eunhae (co-author but the current chapters were all written by me)

Story Title: Prison of Love & Pain

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/455512/prison-of-love-pain-angst-eunhae-hyukmin-superjunior-haehyuk-mpreg-hyukhae

Genre: angst, crime, , mpreg

Story Type (Oneshot, Chaptered, Collection of Oneshots etc.): Chaptered

​Characters: Lee Sungmin, Lee Hyukjae, Lee Donghae as main protagonists

Summary: Lee Hyukjae had always thought he paid enough attention to leaving no traces behind after his crimes. One day however, he makes the mistake of not being thorough enough and ends up in prison with the uneasy fact that he was sentenced to death.
Another man, Lee Donghae, had been imprisoned for killing filthy old men that had frequently paid to watch him strip, despite the fact that they had wives at home.
And lastly, Lee Sungmin, a caring doctor that somehow, wound himself up with a job at that same prison.
So with all three of them trapped within the same place, is it coincidence or fate?
And what will happen if they meet each other?

Status (Ongoing/Complete): ongoing

Is English your first language: no

Additional Notes: it might seem rushed but that's because I needed the little time skips for the other chapters on which I will focus on more

Password: xuehua
roses14 #10
Author: roses14

Story Title: Confessions of A Model

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/448509/confessions-of-a-model-chaerin-ljoe-romance-top-skytempo-bodyguard-seunghyuntop

Genre: Romance

Story Type: Chaptered

​Characters: TOP, CL, Ljoe, 2ne1

Summary: Since Top saved her from kidnapping he gets the opportunity of a lifetime to be her bodyguard

Status (Ongoing/Complete): ongoing

Is English your first language: yesh

Additional Notes:I noticed the first few chapters are really confusing so I hope you are able to go through them and I want help on how I can fix these awkward chapters.

Password: xuehua
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