So this is Bae and he plays lead guitar for Heartbreaker. He's awkward (most young guys are awkward) and doesn't trust easily, but he's got a good heart and is loyal to those that do gain his trust. So he's kind of like an abused dog in a way, a bit hurt by life, but still wants to trust and love those that can do that back. He's kind of a mix between Do-il from SUFBB and Namsoon from School 2013, but is quite passionate towards music. 

This is where the reviews for your characters will go and how you can fix them if things need fixing. I won't be too harsh on layout stuff as I worry more about the characters given to me, so take care when making them. But you'll get 3 tries to fix up your character if there are things wrong and if you need to ask questions to clarify something, ask questions. However, a lot of you should get the general gist of this, but just so you know, your character status will either be pending (needs a review or needs something to be fixed), accepted (application is good, just waiting for selection process), and chosen (character is chosen for the story, congratulations). Depending on how well characters are created and how much I love them, you do have a chance to be chosen early for a position, otherwise, characters will be chosen during the selection process when the deadline comes.

 

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Thanks for being my first applicant for this story, however, there were a few things I just need clarification on. For his personality, could you expand a bit more on some of those traits, maybe give examples on how he's possessive or how he reacts to new people or the people he's close to a bit more. And could you expand a bit more on his relationship with his family? Like how does his father feel about the accident, how his new step-mother and step-brother treats him, and how they feel about Soorin in general. This way I can understand his family situation a bit more. I can make some educated guesses, but it would be helpful if you added a bit more about those things in the app. And for Kang Seri, what would they do if they were competing for Soorin's love interest's heart? I get that they're a bit of a and two-faced, but it would be great to have some extra details on how they would treat Soorin and the possible love interest. Once that is done, I can gladly accept your app. Oh, it looks much better now and I definitely have a much better grasp over your character. The background section really helped, so thanks for fixing everything. :)

 

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I like him and I'm really glad you added the extra information about his daughter because it really helped get a clear picture of him. His daughter sounds super cute and I like how he's quite responsible and mature and I like how everything fits rather well. I can easily picture his childhood and how the move would lead to him eventually get a girl pregnant at 16. I think it's funny how he's a bit of a germaphobe, but his daughter basically cleans the house. I also like how even though he's had a daughter, he may be a good dad, but he's also a bit of a punk as well with the way he dresses. I also think it's interesting that his parents still help him out even though they're estranged, but he is still their son so it makes sense that they feel the need to make sure he and his daughter are doing well. Overall, I liked him and his daughter. Thanks for applying. 

 

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This guy's quite a mystery with how he acts and how he seems kind of harmless but actually isn't, but it somehow fits and I can understand how he came to be the way he is. Background was very helpful and I'm glad you explained how his personality and the certain things he might do or how he sees things. I really liked how you have broken down the likes, dislikes, and trivia section and gave quite a bit for me to work with. I like how you explained how much he liked the band and how he needed it, because that's a good trait for the drummer to have as the drummers are usually the ones that are the backbone to the band and are less likely to do something like go solo and whatnot, so thanks for adding that in. Good job on the background section and I like how his family expects certain things from him, even though he's a bit of the black sheep of the family. Overall, I enjoyed the app, thanks for applying.  

 

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He's very interesting and I like how he's kind of moody and unpredictable. I also think it's interesting how he's observant, but he also doesn't have the memory that would be useful when being like that, so that was kind of cool to see. Everything seems to flow rather well and I can definitely understand how Jongdae works. I like the break down section of his likes, dislikes, and habits, giving him a bit more life. Scene suggestions were fun to read and I found everything to work rather well. I also think it's kind of funny how people think he's a bit like a girl at first, wondering if he's pmsing and whatnot. Overall, it was a fun read and a thank you for applying. Application accepted. 

 

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I really like how quirky and eccentric Heejun is, and paired with that independent nature and confidence makes him seem like a very interesting guy. A guy that may not easily be liked by others, but with the right people, would be a bit of a riot. I like the breakdown of his timeline and I enjoyed his background section quite a bit. I'm also interested by the fact that's from a rather influential and rich family, but is also quite the troublemaker as well. I really do appreciate all the information that was put in this app and I like how you explained everything. It was very easy to picture Heejun as a person and I appreciate that. Overall, I really, really like Heejun and found him to be quite the cool guy. Thanks for applying. 
 

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Not going to lie, but I love Eun's pseudonym, it's really interesting and catchy and just rolls of the tongue. The whole app was really cute though and I couldn't help but chuckle as I read. I really liked the personality and background sections and how you explained everything. Monday's really sweet and cute and I kind of want to keep him in my pocekt to be honest. And I can just picture this kid in my head and everything just seems to flow so well and come alive, and I just really, really want to write him in this. So Monday's the first to be chosen. Congratulations. (I really don't have much to say really, I just fell in love with this app and Monday.)

 

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The personality section was pretty scarce, but I think I have rough idea to how Taiji is as a person, but it would be helpful if you could just expand a bit more in that section. Otherwise I think the background section was done well and I really liked the trivia section. I think it's cool that Taiji's colorblind and the fears/habits sections were good too. However, where's his son? I get that he was taken by children protective services, but where did he end up going? Is he in a foster home or an orphanage, have people adopted him? I understand that Taiji's heartbroken and devestated over the whole thing, but it would be helpful to know where his child went. Other than that, the rest of the app was fine, but please expand on the sections I talked about because that would be really helpful for me when getting a better grasp on your character. Ah, thank you for fixing everything. I have a much better grasp on everyth

 

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Okay, I think it's really odd how this guy seems cold and unapproachable but is the total opposite when one gets to know him. Especially when you paired it off with him being a bit of a brat as well. It seems very contradictory and doesn't make that much sense. I could understand if he looked scary and mean but was totally the opposite once you started talking to him, but having him seem cold but bratty and then cute (and naive) just doesn't make that much sense to me. At least in the context you have. So it would be great if you could expand more on his character to get me to understand him a bit better or stick with one or two of the major traits you explained and expand on those two instead. Other than that, the other sections are written well. It's just the personality section that needs to be explained a bit better. Thank you for taking my advice and fixing up your app, it was really helpful at getting to know Jihun better. :)

 

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Jaesun sounds pretty cute and I really like his personality. Never thought I would see kuudere on an app before, so that was definitely interesting and new. I found the background section to be written well and I liked how he joined the group for his friend. The trivia section gave your character some more life, giving him more personality and letting me get a better grasp of his character. I also really thougt it was interesting that his best friend is a 60 year old man, but I think it's cute and interesting. It was something quite new to see, so kudos on that. Overall, this was a pretty good app and was a fun read. Thanks for applying. :)

 

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Okay, I couldn't help but fall for Finn and how you wrote him. I really liked the breakdown of his personality and was glad to see how much of a fun loving kid and erted jokester he was. Like he kind of seems like a riot and I can't help but kind of want to write him and how he would be with the other members of the group, especially since it seems like he would joke with them a lot. The background was pretty interesting and I thought it was neat how you went with him being a bit of a military brat, but still being his own person that didn't exactly fit the mold. I think it's interesting that this guy's pretty smart and has talents like understanding languages well, but because of his comical personality, not everyone knows that. So that was cool to see. The trivia section was great and I like the love triangle aspect that was in the app. Overall, I really, really enjoyed this character. Thanks for applying, you're chosen. :D
 

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I really like him, he seems cute and I like how his personality just seems to work. And I like how well you explained everything in the personality and background sections. It was very helpful and I could easily get a good grasp of your character. And how he ends up with Heartbreaker was really interesting to read. Trivia and relationship sections are well written, thank you for all the information and the length, very helpful. And the scene requests! They were really fun to read. Overall, I enjoyed the app and found Joonyoung to be a cool character. Thanks for applying.  

 

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I was definitley not expecting Limwoo to be so moody, but I think it works. He kind of reminds me of a mad scientist a bit, but more artsy. I also appreciate how much depth and information you put in the background section, it really helps me get a better grasp of your character. I really liked the trivia section and I like the relationship section a lot to. Jun Li and Limwoo's relationship was something I really enjoyed and I like how their relationship is based off actions more than words. Overall, I really liked Limwoo and was glad that you put so much thought and effort into this app. It really helped me get a pretty good grasp over him and if chosen could potentially fit in my fic. Thanks for applying. 

 

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Well, I definitely didn't expect to get a character like Miharu, but he is quite the interesting guy and I like all the detail you put into him. I think it's interesting how fascinated he is with death and how he takes as many risks as he does without caring too much about what could possibly happen except maybe the thrill he gets. I also think it's interesting how he's all touchy-feely with others, but as soon as someone turns that around, he's all closed off and awkward about it. His relationship with Ryeoshin is quite odd and heartbreaking, but very easy to picture. Trivia and background sections were very helpful in helping me get a good picture of him and how he may be like around the others and of course how he is around Ryeoshin. Overall, this was a wonderful app and very informative. 

 

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Ryeoshin sounds like a hardass, even if he is small. I like how confident and competent he seems to be and how focused he is on making sure things are efficient, successful, and worth his time. His and Miharu's relationship is very interesting and odd, but it just seems to work and is easy to picture their dynamics with what has been written down. Background and trivia were done well and I thank you for all the extra information that was given, because that was more than helpful when trying to get a grasp of Ryeoshin and Miharu. They seem quite broken and messed up in their own ways and obviously have a lot of healing to do. The scene requests were cool and I just really like the amount of thought that went into the app. Thanks for applying. 
 

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I really liked him and it was quite different to see a lot of first pov in the app, but it really let me get a grasp on Taehyun's character. I like how he's intelligent, but he's also quite mischievous and kind of selfish and just genuinely seems to know what he wants and will do anything to get it. Background was interesting and I do like how you explained how everything was started and that Finn was one of the first members of the group. I also liked the trivia section and there were definitely a few moments where I couldn't help but laugh a bit. Family section was written really well and some of the scene suggestions were kind of hilarious because I could easily picture them and how some of the others would react. Overall, I really liked him. 

 

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He sounds really cute and that nickname that he has is adorable. Personality and background sections are written well and I like all the information you gave me about how he is personality wise and why he acts the way he does due to his background. Trivia was good and gave me a little bit more information about Seunghyun. The family and friends section was a little scarce, but I still got a good grasp on your character with how much information you gave in the background section. Overall, it was a pretty good app, thanks for applying again. 

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I like him and he sounds really cute. I liked the nicknames for him and even though I'm sure I couldn't use all of them if he's chosen, but some were really ingenius anyway. I liked the timeline and the breakdown of it, as well as the style section quite a bit. Haeyun's personality seems quite sweet and I like his background section and how everything just flows together. I thought it was really interesting how he had already applied for military service and gone through it, so that was a cool tidbit. Trivia section was well written and helped me get a grasp of Haeyun even more and the family section was really helpful too. Overall, this was another good app, thanks for applying a second time.  
 

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Another cute one, but this time a bit more emotional and odder than usual. I think it's adorable that he talks to bunnies and likes them so much. Parts of his personality made me laugh a bit and even thought background was kind of short, I was able to get a pretty good grasp of Sunggyu as a person. Trivia, likes, dislikes, and habits section was good and the family and friends section was quite helpful too. And I thought it was an interesting tidbit that he likes to wear a lot of bracelets, even though he's not very fashion conscious. Scene suggestions were also quite cute. Overall, it was a pretty good app, thanks for applying. 

 

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