Fists and Glasses

Description

Baekhyun was the most popular guy in school despite the fact that he also was the biggest bully in the city. Not only did people fear him, they also loved him. Being the boss of everyone, he had a complicated relationship with the cute nerd Kai. One day Kai couldn't take being bullied and loved at the same time anymore. Chanyeol was deeply in love with Baekhyun, but being the shy nerd he was, he never dared to confess. The place is filled with dangerous emotions and deadly feelings. For the first time, someone finally dared to tell Baekhyun off. Everything will change.

Foreword

hello, hope you like my fanfic! I spent a lot of time on it, and I am very serious about becoming a professional author in the future. I would be so happy if you leave a comment and tell me what you think, but remember; this is my first time, so please be gentle. :)

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ParkMiyoung #1
Chapter 5: I gotta say, I did like the story plot. But, you have a lot to learn still. For one, you could try and use a bit more detail, also on the background story. It seemed very rushed, because the events just happened really quickly and again there were small details missing (like how they get from one place to another, do they walk? Take the elevator? Etc.) such details seem insignificant, but if you want to really become a writer, those details make the story a real story.

This is only your first story right? Well for a first it was okay ^_^
By reading books you'll get what I mean with details and it also will help improve your writingstyle. Now I'm not saying I'm a good writer, but I read thousands of books and I just try to judge your story a bit by them.

I wish you good luck in the future and as you keep writing stories, it'll become easier!
ParkMiyoung #2
Since you are so serieus of becoming an author in the future, I will read this fanfiction and once I've finished I will honestly tell you what my opinion on the story is and give you some feedback for your future stories :)
holyjongin #3
love it! love the humour hahaha
jonginyo #4
Chapter 2: AHAHA, omg dying from laughter lmao. great story, really curious about the rest of the story, keep updating pls! :)
SehunsWoman #5
Chapter 2: Oh my god! This story is funky fresh! I love it, its original and new. Please update more. I wonder whats Chanyeol going to say now.
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