chapter 17

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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"have you found her yet?"

"yes, she's studying at YG Academy."

The person scoffed, unbelievable at the information from her one of the genius hackers. "that's odd. I didn't know she would be studying there."

"but how can you be sure it's her?"

The hacker smirk, "I've got many connections around her. so looking for her it's like a peanut ya know."

She shook her head, "that is why you are really being useful around here, JR."

JR folds his arms over his chest, "so what are the plans, Jiyeon?"

The girl named Jiyeon turned around from her window and looked at JR with a grin on her face, "we should move to our plan B."

JR actually surprised at sudden Jiyeon answered but he quickly hid his expression with a straight face. "aren't you in rush? I thought you just wanted her to not having a normal life?"

Jiyeon blew up her nails, "I am not. in fact, I was taking it slowly."

JR let out a tsked, "I guess that's it. I need to go. I'll see you when I see you then." he nodded his head and went out of her meeting room.

Little JR knew, Jiyeon lips curved into a smirk, "poor he.. he didn't know anything, does he? tsk tsk. what a shame."

With that Jiyeon take her phone from the table and call the person that she's been waiting for.

"I've got work for you guys."

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Sumi rolled her eyes in annoyed when he followed her everywhere like a lost puppy.

"yah Sumi!"

She let out a groan before turned around with a frustration looks on her face, "for God sake, will you stop following me?!"

He halted on his track and Sumi threw him a glare before walking away leaving him alone in a daze.

Sumi let out a breath of sigh relief when someone jumped in front of her making Sumi screamed in shock, "yah! what the hell, Minzy!"

Minzy was laughing so hard seeing Sumi reaction. "gosh, you're so funny. why did you keep looking at your back uh?"

Sumi blew her bangs out of frustration, "Chanyeol been following me around. Its kind of stress me out."

Minzy giggles, "woah, that's the first time someone messing you around."

Sumi kicked her shin as Minzy yelped in pain, "ouch, yah. I was stating the truth."

Sumi narrowed her eyes and flip her hair in sarcastic, "serve you right."

"Sumi! wait up!" they heard someone yelling out Sumi's name.

Sumi let out a frustrated sigh, "speaking of the devil, there he is."

She turned around with annoyed looks, "what now Chanyeol?!"

Chanyeol shot his hands in the air in defeat, "woah, chill. I know I'm being annoying around you but what can I do... I don't have any friend around here except you." He pouted.

Sumi cringed in disgust, "ergh.. why must out of people I meet you.. whatever Chanyeol. stay out of my way."

Before she walking away, Chanyeol quickly grabbed her wrist, "why you always pushing me away? I was just want to be your friend, that's all."

Minzy looking at both of them in confusion. Sumi heaved a sigh, "trust me, you will be regret to be my friend." she yanked her wrist from his grip and walking away leaving Chanyeol left dumbfounded.

Minzy looked at Sumi in amused. She then tilted her head at Chanyeol, "well then, see ya around." with that, she joined Sumi who seems not caring beside her. She looked startled when Minzy wrap her arms on her shoulder.

Chanyeol stared at Sumi's back with mixed feelings. Some part of him that he really wanted to know what is Sumi like but then he remembered it was just for his work.

He put his hands

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!