chapter 16

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Someone's POV

Why should i attend here again? I'm too old for going back to high school. I sighs and somewhat regret that i actually agreed with this.

"Hyung, isn't this what you want in the first place?" asked my friend in annoyed since I had not making any effort to walk inside the school. I'm still stuck here in the car frozen in my seat.

"shut up. i waa actually waiting for someone." i lied as he just narrow his eyes at me in suspicious.

"it didn't look like it."

I shushed him and when i finally give up, "fine. I'll regret now. happy?"

He burst out into laughter as i looked at him in disbelief, "its not even funny."

He dramatically wiped a fake tear from his eyes and shake his head, "i found its hilarious. so tell me Yeol hyung.. did you by any chance found her yet?"

I shrugged my shoulder in defeat, "yeah but it seems she been absent for days now."

I then looked at him, "why would i agreed with this job in the first place, Sehun?"

He place his hands on my shoulder, "everyone is got their respective job, hyung."

"i still don't get it. why don't you instead doing this?" i asked him in frustrated as he just chuckle at my whining. "you know so well why. but hey at least i'm being helpful around here unlike the other hyung." he rolled his eyes in annoyance.

I just scoff at him and of course i do know why our boss didn't let him take this mission. it was because he still new and lack of experience to do this type of mission.

Then, i heard a bell ringing loudly and i groaned since it was a signal the period will start soon.

"hyung, i know you can do this. you are the best out of the best. no worries. everything will end soon. fighting!" he happily said at me as i just let out an awkward laugh. "but it doesn't i can be a totally student here right? i can ditch out anytime i like, right?"

Sehun facepalm in disbelief at my words. "hyung, as long as you don't caught thats all."

I nodded my head determine and let out a breath to calm my nerve down. "let's do this."

As soon as i went out from the car, i saw a very familiar figure running in fast going inside the school as she been late to come on time.

"hyung, fighting!" Sehun said with a smile on his face and i just mouthed 'thanks' and hurriedly went inside the school.

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Sumi's POV

I was running to the school because i'm not in the mood to talk with my Dad or Bigbang member because of yesterday meeting with my real father.

I purposely woke up late so that i won't meet their faces but oh well they also still in the house and it was hard for me to ignore their presence. By then i skipped the breakfast and just go to school by bus.

And to my bad luck, the bus already leaving me behind as i had no

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!