When He Smiles...

Description

One smile was all it took. And her heart was his. 

Foreword

Just like a fish caught on a fish hook,

Just like a dying man hooked on a ventilation machine, 

Just like a nerd hooked on a book, 

Just like a druggie hooked on pot,

 

She, well she was hooked on his smile. 

 


Story started on: Feb. 6. 2014

Omg! I just cannot resist! I love them from debut and I just can't help myself! I must write something! I don't know how long it's gonna be but I hope you guys read and subscribe! =D 

LOOK AT MY POSTER! Isn't it BEAUTIFUL?!?? =D Thank you so much to one of my readers, KPOPGIRL18!!!! =D i looove you!!!! ^^

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otakueden1 #1
Chapter 18: I don't care if u are a nuna or a leader.. Even though my fav is Bambam ..I feel bad for Jackson..I READ A FANFIC LAST TIME AND BAMBAM LOVED THE OC BUT THE OC JB WERE TOGETHER.BAMBAM WAS LIKE "Hyung,why cant she be mine"..Wats wrong with these OCs ㅠ.ㅠ anywas lov ur story i will keep on imagining JB is Jackson and Jackson is jb
-Jenny-
#2
I wanna stab that poster (~_~メ)
-Jenny-
#3
Uwaaaa T^T I want Jackson to be with Sophie .. huhu. That's the only part I'm not satisfied with. Hahaha. Can I kill JB so those two can be together ? Definitely not. This is not my story. Lol. Anyway, I thank you for the nice end for my Jackson ;) great story. Filled my lonely day :)
watgirl200 #4
Chapter 19: You're a fantastic writer!!! The characters were well developed and the story was more detailed than the characters just doing romantic things and being superficial. Thanks for the great read.
Tigerlilylilyy #5
Chapter 19: When I saw the 'updated' sign, I was surprised, but then when I saw how it was complete, that made me even more surprised, hahaha. I didn't expect this story to be this short, but I can understand why you made it this length. It was a really enjoyable read, and I'm actually really happy for who Sophie ended up with! ^^ I mean, the poster is a dead giveaway, but I was just curious as to how you would turn the tables, hehe. By the way, her mentioning about bringing some apple pie to his wedding is just...I don't exactly know how to word it, but it's sweet--like as though that thing will always be something to tie the two together, and that they'll continue to be the best of friends, for as long as possible :'D

I don't exactly know if that makes any sense LOL so in other words, I liked the ending, hahaha.

Anyway, thank you for writing this, because I had a great time reading it! <3
luv_kero
2457 streak #6
Chapter 19: I really liked this story, especially since there aren't that as many JB-centric stories as I'd like there to be. :P You did an amazing job capturing and conveying all of the characters' feelings, and I really love how realistic it seemed. ^-^ Sophie didn't just ditch Jackson and it really warmed my heart to see their friendship overcome his crush on her. JB and Sophie are such a sweet couple, even with their ups and downs, and I'm so happy they had their happily ever after! :D Kudos to you for a fantastic story! :)
Nyaikou
#7
Chapter 19: Haha I liked it up till the epilogue. I think you ended it well, you had me waiting almost a month for this last chapter. I'm glad she went with JB actually, I think other readers are used to the cliche of her going for another guy halfway through the story.

Your story inspired mine so I hope you check out mine :) I hope you write more GOT7 stories in the future, your writing style is lovely.

Oh about the epilogue? I just think we can imagine what happens after in the near future. Just my opinion.
Tigerlilylilyy #8
Chapter 18: Do you hear that?

I'm sure you did, because my heart just kind of bROKE??????? ;__;

Anyways! Oh my goodness, I feel so bad for Jackson right now, and yet at the same time, I also feel a little surprised at Sophie's realisation? As in, the way you wrote it out, had me sitting here and thinking "Oh?" like how she was probably feeling, so I think you captured that suddenness quite well! ^^

And although I'm feeling really sad for Jackson, I'm still happy with her choice with JB--I mean, I just have a really soft spot for the 'other guy' in stories/dramas/movies/etc, so yeah :'D

I can't wait for the next update!!!! <3
Nyaikou
#9
Chapter 18: If she's happy with JB, then she should stay with him but poor Jackson, his heart is breaking and he feels like he has no choice.
rikkacho
#10
Chapter 18: ㅠ.ㅠ its okay jackson you can lean on this nuna .. ill make you all the apple pies you want :/ ill even learn to make all the jjigae and dimsum you want .. just dont be sad

Ottokeeeeeee~ but *sigh* twas expected since your wallpic is jb not jackson :/ .. i hope youll give jackson someone tho *coughmecough* x3

Anywho ... thanks for the update authornim :)