Mortis Amor (On-Hold)

Description

"No don't leave me." He shouted at the top of his lungs.

 

"Just remember that I will forever love you." She said as she close her eyes.

 

He look at her body, slowly turned into colorful butterflies and went to the their kingdom.

 

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"We can't be together." She told him firmly.

 

"I know..." he agreed.

 

"So its now goodbye." She said trying to be strong enough to hold her emotions.

 

"Goodbye..." he said and disappeared leaving her alone - cold and confused.

Foreword

I was supposed to post this yesterday, but something happened the moment I touched my bed. Everything was a blur, the force was too strong for me to fight it, my maid tried to help me, but I know for the fact that I am the only person who can help myself. So I told myself, I will be back, but this time stronger and wiser. But for now, I will follow what this powerful force wants me to do. and that is to sleep. 

 

Okay, I will go now. :) And type for Chapter 1. :)

Yvziane_Lorrayne
I will ty to update this Friday.

Comments

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CNBDania
#1
Chapter 4: Fantasy, mysteri and romance, good story. Pleaaaasssse update,,, this story have great plot. I want to read more
jjjong
#2
Chapter 3: kind a confusing, may be more chapter will make it clear
YoonaFever
#3
Chapter 2: So this is jongyoon...subscribed!
feifell #4
Chapter 2: I like your story author-nim~
Please update soon...
1380MC #5
Chapter 2: more jongyoon please
Yvziane_Lorrayne #6
Huhuhu. Chapter 1 is such a disappointment for me. I can't even feel my characters emotion. I will just edit this, then I will type chapter 2. Why did you guys read such a crappy update? Huhuhu. I'm so sorry again. Chapter 1 is so so crappy and I let you guys read a crappy chapter. You guys deserve only the best. Again I'm sorry.
cnsdGirl #7
Chapter 1: LOL~ Unnies always make fun of Seohyun. No, tease~ :3
Everything is alright until..innocent. Like them, I need to proceed the word 'innocent'. And..wow~ This fic is really good. :D

Update soon!
believerremember
#8
Chapter 1: I really thought that it was something worse! :o though i agree that sleepiness is hard to fight. Haha! this is an interesting chapter so far. Keep it up. Btw i laughed at taeyeon & sunny's scene. Haha
believerremember
#9
Whatever that is you experienced, i hope u do find the strength & get well soon. Take care always! ^^ oh and btw, is this angst & fantasy? ;)
cnsdGirl #10
"I was supposed to post this yesterday, but something happened the moment I touched my bed. Everything was a blur, the force was too strong for me to fight it, my maid tried to help me, but I know for the fact that I am the only person who can help myself."
You're awesome. Make me scared just by reading that. -_-''
Anyway, is this angst? Woooottt~ My taste~~ :3
FIGHTINGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!