Kibum and xander are both gone now and Eli sems to be the only one who notices how soohyun in crumbling. Hopefully he can cheer him up before it's to late.
Chapter 1: This story hit my heart hard. I still remember the pain Ifelt when stupid NH Media kicked Xander and Kibum out, and I have seen a change in UKISS since then. They don't seem to talk about those two, and it makes me wonder what really happened there. It is nice when I see that they have more recent interactions, though, so that gives me hope that they are still okay as friends. On to the story! I loved it, and it was really sweet of Eli to surprise Soohyun with this and it was undoubtedly good for all of them. This story was cute and the ship is adorable (even though I ship Xander/Eli typically). Thank you for sharing this with us♡.
Chapter 1: First of all... that gif! XD rofl Oh goodness. Eli, you goofball. >.>
But back to the story at hand! Despite being short and very confined, this one had a surprising amount of emotion in it that you managed to convey well. The beginning was almost depressing and it tugs at your heartstrings the way you explain the situation - especially how Soohyun must be feeling given the circumstances.
I love the way that you make Eli wonder if he's the only one worrying and then find out the others are too. The whole situation is painful, if in part because it's so believable. T_T Watch your homophones (desert vs dessert) but otherwise, it comes together nicely.
It was interesting seeing the way that Soohyun is sort of crumbling and then getting that teensy bit of insight into his character at the end with Eli's surprise. I loved that waking up scene! That was priceless. hehe I definitely laughed out loud and could really picture it. His surprise was a heartwarming gift for Soohyun and the way Eli fell asleep again was also adorable.
The last little bit felt a teensy bit rushed but I can also see them being straightforward/frank with each other at that point. It was still sweet all the same though! Good job overall. I very much enjoyed it. ^_^
Chapter 1: great story! I like it! :D
eum... that is Kibum not Kimbum...
Kibum and Kimbum are different person... :)
please make other SooLi story next time~
keep writing~
hwaiting! ^^
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