Chapter 3: Uhh an maybe you should add trigger warnings for those who had traumatic experiences with things like death of loved ones and especially a trigger warning for suicide...

Chapter 2: Uhhhh the part about a "boyfriend being taken away by a man is a blow to the female ego" was unnecessary, because it has nothing to do with being a girl if your bf falls in love with someone else and it's lowkey homophobic to entertain that mindset...

this is really good

Chapter 1: This is divine ;u;

Chapter 3: My gosh. i love that song too much. The song was too dramatic and I just love it. It always made me cry. My heart strings. TT_-TT

Chapter 3: Really I didn't know..this song really moved me, watching baek and chen perfed it on immortal song..as i read through the lyrics again, i felt it and as if i could hear baek and chen's voice..i felt how hurt kyungsoo was at that moment..u really did a good a job here authornim..

Chapter 2: damn that was so heartbreaking,, Kaisoo <////////33
good job author-nim u made my heart sank..

Chapter 3: i'm ugly sobbing now, you know...btw, nice stor~^^~fighthing!!

Chapter 3: I guess it settle kyungsoo's anxiety now,since he finally met jongin and lived happily ever after on another world..

Chapter 3: Like this!!! They both die but they are now happy together