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증상 ¦ SYMPTOMS → searchin' for rich homo lovers .ACCEPTED // awESOme sAUCE u passed first round /claps
REJECTED // ur app has way too many mistakes or it's just too half-aSSed for our taste
PENDING // us butts have not read ur app or #2LAZY4REVIEW
CHOSEN // cOOL BEANs ur in ze story
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aereumchae
» misfortune follows
oh wowza hi sunny, /chokes so uhm /chokes more frankly, right when i saw the pics i got disappointed, considering that that's how you chose sehun. you didn't follow my notes. i might have messed up the width, but you still didn't change back the border. it bothered me that you said she does useless stuff but likes to keep things relevant. tbh, overall i liked her personality bc u usually don't get girls like her. btw if she has decidophobia, you could have just said she's indescisive bc ur description makes it sound mild. her brother's ulzzang is a tomboy, um. the love interest part was not much of what we're looking for since, ya know, you kind of just slacked on the relationship. you didn't give us details or anything on how he takes over your life kinda. bc that's what the plotline says... but thanks for applying yo~ u can change anything if you want to give yourself another chance.
— LAU
× — temp rejected
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  strikes ( x ) ( ) ( )
age 20
social rank low-mid
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minjungpark
» misfortune follows
hello there dani, well what can i start off with? firstly, your description is amazing - very detailed. that's what i'm - me, personally - am i fan of. haha. alright, so regarding the personality, i'm having mixed feelings about it. her a-class attitude matches the primadonna role more but you gave her a reason that more or less fits. so i'm thinking is it possible to water it down a bit? i like how minjung is the independent type - especially when it comes to her own problems. and regarding your interview, i had quite a few good laughs. no joke. in general i see misfortune follows as more of a meek character, but your description of minjung being a strong individual willing to stand up for herself despite being poor and despite having to live through such harsh climates has actually changed my mind a bit. other than the personality, everything is awesome! you're accepted.
— RIKO
× — accepted
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age 24
social rank low
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yoshidaalana
» primadonna
alright aman, well... i guess i should call you amanda here anyways, your description is spectacular, very detailed and insightful. and omfg i love how A-Class she is about everything, very primadonna. is it bad that on the third paragraph where you say "she comes on like a force of nature etc," i read... "she comes in like a wrecking ball"?! OMFG, SOMEONE LINK RIN BALL RIGHT HERE. click here for rinception. and forward! to how your character was stupendously well-rounded. everything had a reason and it's cause/effect which is very good for a character foundation - millION THUMBS UP TBH. a few things for concern is just the partying attitude - i think i'm a little questionable on a rich girl partying because it doesn't seem much like what a snobby rich girl would do.
— RIKO
× — accepted
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age 20
social rank high af
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