Chapter 4: Well, I like what you did here! I mean my last comment in here was rather shallow and close-minded, let's say because I didn't understand not know about the story's concept, or whatever.
I totally enjoy the fact that for once we get to see Lucifer on another angle.

I might feel a bit selfish, but because you're influenced by christianism to write the story, I didn't really feel concerned, and for this reason I could enjoy this amazing piece of writing a lot more! Well, just because, and sorry if it's offensive, I consider that a large part of the bible is actually fiction which was added my humans.

Continue to work hard and write from your heart, because it works really well! :D
We can easily feel how talented you are, and also, it's clear that you care about your stories, because the plots are well written and let's just flawless. ^^

Chapter 4: Whoaaaa! I enjoyed this story so much although I admit I was a little wary of it before I began. And despite your warning from the Author's Notes, I proceeded to read the explanation anyway. And well, it made me appreciate your story even more. I always find it helpful to know the state of mind or what the author was thinking of and about while writing, so thank you for sharing the behind the scenes stuff kind of. XD To be honest, although I believe in God and I am a follower of Christ, I'm sometimes left to wonder why people think that such a rigid order is "paradise" and I thought that you portrayed the honey-and-hatchet duality of it very well. And after reading everything, I think that it's actually a more reasonable description than the ones a lot of church-going people give. Especially the way it described God and Lucifer. I like the way that it's not conventional, and although I'm not sure if these are the kinds of words you want to hear, I'm glad that I read it and thankful that you wrote it.^^ If anything, thank you for reminding me of my faith. It's so hard to remember what's important in the midst of people telling you what's right and what's wrong. <3

Chapter 4: here I am reading your story again. and I am speechless, dumbfounded, mesmerized by your story. I truly am. your ideas, the unique plot, I just ;^; this is so beautifully written. I can't help but feel like I'm woobin. my feels ;_; I hope you won't mind me commenting hehe

"God is dead" :/ That's just...

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Chapter 4: I know that when reading your stories I am always hit with so many emotions. I thought I was prepared for that when I started to read. I honestly underestimated how much your writing effects my emotions. I can't help but feel bad for Lucifer when his brothers and sisters changed, I was glad he feel in love, disappointed in how he and his brother reacted. I was so sad when I heard his story and happy when I read the end. All of that and more just for one character is what I felt. If I tried to put how I felt for the others it would take a long time. I love how you make the readers emotionally envolved. I missed reading things you wrote. Thank you so much for sharing this!!!

Chapter 1: Holy crawfish!! I knew this would be good but just this first chapter is just wow!

I can't wait to read this!!!