Dear my beloved ChanKhun-shippers and readers this is supposed to be my ChanKhun Christmas story.
I won't be able to upload it today evening, but I will upload it as soon as possible ♥
Chapter 1: with each word you bring out so many emotion in manner that you can't stop but be the character you create....... YOU create a world with your words and i can't help but emerge in it...
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............... i'm falling in love with ur writing ,,, :)
Chapter 1: Wow I love this, it has such a depth to the story that I was simly captivated!!!! I love how you made it as the tide and it was so perfect, so lovely. <3 This is one of my favorites of your writings and that is saying a LOT!!!! <3<3<3
Chapter 1: Ah so beautifully written, love it, the way you describe everything was so beautiful unnie, the way khun thinking was well translated, and not confusing at all.
Thank you for the awesome fic.
Will wait for more unnie, but I hope something more casual next, so there's will be a lot type of chankhun fic...
<3<3
Chapter 1: This is such a beautiful story. *0* I admire beautiful words and phases that you use in the story so much. Your ability to describe the emotional and thought part is really progress. It flows so smooth.
I love the story-line so much. It's realistic and understandable. It reminds me of firefly. You know that it might be very dangerous but still, you can't resist that tempting fire. Without knowing, you are playing with beautiful fire. But even after you realise, you can't stop yourself. You want it more and more althought you know one day you might regret it. These kinds of feeling, I understand so well. And I love it when you use it in this story. It makes me understand some of my feelings better. ^^
Only one thing that I want to comment but it's just a little thing. I know you wanna be a perfect writer, so this might help you a little. I don't know if it's because of my bad English skill too. But I confuse in some part of the story. Like I loss time in the story. I don't know if this part is still today or it's tomorrow already. Maybe because the story describe only Khun's time within the circus. So when it changes into another day, I can't catch it up. I take some times to realise 'Oh, this is another day already'.
Anyway, I'm very happy reading this. It's a joyful time. Mixing emotions happen while reading but it leaves good feelings behind. Thank you for this good story. I love it. ^^
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