The Benevolent Killer

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"Mama, kill the man, put the pistol on his head, pull the trigger and he is dead..." 

Kris banged his head fervently against the concrete wall in a desperate attempt to stop the spooky chanting inside his head. It had been haunting him for days and he would give anything for the horrible torment to end. 

"Hey, hey hey, don't kill yourself," the voice in his head said, "You are The Chosen One." 

For that moment, time stopped. 

 

Foreword

An entry for 

 

A U M E R - - - | A WRITING CONTEST |

Prompt used:

GUN (object prompt)

 

Enjoy, guys! xD 

P.S. This is my first attempt at writing stories of this genre, hence, I'll really appreciate it if you guys can give me constructive feedback by commenting! :) 

 

 

BTW guys, like my poster? (Well personally I love this a lot) 

Credits to 

We Got Fired ---//  graphic shop for the lovely poster~ They're really fast and efficient, and the graphics they do are really cool! (As you all can see for yourselves) Do visit their shop sometimes! :D 

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StrawberryFrozen #1
Chapter 2: this is confusing, I'm trying hard to comprehend. But, that's the attraction! I'm anticipating the next chap
isonexotic #2
kristaeee yuhuuuuu :3
Samoyed_triangle #3
Chapter 1: Its a littlr confusing...
Who is the killer actually? Is it Kris or somebody else?
Who is Taeyeon?
I'm confused to the max..hmmm

In your forward you said Kris banged his head...so it mean, he is the 'benevolent killer' xDD

Okay..I'll just wait for the next chap and the future chaps to find out more... KrisTar rules!!!
Foreverexofangirl #4
Chapter 1: Kristaee! Haha.
MingMei #5
Please update soon, i really like your story <3
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