Paradisezxc- Telling Chunji Goodbye

Story Title: (4/5)

It kind of gives away what the story will be about.

Description/Foreword: (10/10)

I think you revealed a bit too much about the story in the description.

Story Plot: (4/5)

It’s not really original, but props for putting in your own twists.

Flow: (10/10)

The story didn’t seem rushed.

Grammar/Spelling: (9/10)

There a few typos, but other than that, there were no mistakes.

Appearance: (10/10)

The poster’s great and I love the layout. You used readable font and color, so that’s good too. :)

Enjoyment: (10/10)

Total: (47/50)

Ermahgerd, this was my first TeenTop fic and I really had a great time reviewing this!